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Welcome to a story told through countless aeon; a story about a ragged boy who most would say is at the bottom of the barrel in life.
He has nothing but a tattered apartment, yet this seemingly simple and pitiful boy one day finds a book under his sofa, and although it looked like any other antique, such a book will bring him on a path beyond!
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Pretty cool story. Although the cultivation can seem pretty confusing at the start, I think that it got better explained afterwards. It seems it has been slowed down later on, and I like how the author tries to improve 😂😂😂 A lot better compared to his other story.
The only author who keep trying to improve his writing by reading every comment. The reason readers who give bad review is because they are from old batch(old readers who read chapters before edited). Well the difficulty to comprehend this cultivation book is indeed hard 😂. Only after I read the simplified version, then I get the hang of it lol. It is about mc want to get stronger after regretting for being weak. This novel should contain tags like tragedy since mc's feeling can be felt by readers too
Sigh read till chapter 3 and couldn't take it anymore. Apparently, the so-called miss Yu doesn't do anything nice for him but he gets a sense of peace being around her. Apparently, she is going to get kidnapped but he has to fight for her, why? Because of plot development. These brain dead mc's and novels make frustrated. Done with the novel. Bye-bye. Good luck.
I realize that after all the chapter i read i still doesn't make a review so this is my review. The main character has extreme tendency to be stronger for what the reason he has and i like him the author too describe other people like albeit slightly but like real people i like the plot and twist but i still doesn't see of where the MC set his eyes on, on the heaven or on the God of the universe i still doesn't know. For the world building for me it is little bagus but its likeable and i like it but there's is seriously a need of throughout explanation about power level how things work and the other. For the story development try to slow down a bit i think. And that's it and that is my longest review till the date. Thanks for the work author
I really like how the story starts and the future potential development looks really good, The cultivation system seems a little different and really cool,
Great 👍 story my dude 🚹 you just need to work on the stability of your updates and you can easily reach top 10 but other than that love the mc at least he better than those p##ssy mcs in isekai novels😂😂😂.
Pls More chap readers love novel with more chapter............and keep up with the hard work..................................................................................................................
Although shameless, I'd just like to say that if at any day I don't upload, don't assume that I have given up :P. (It shouldn't happen often, unless life hates me.)
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I will say this I was kinda confused with it honestly it just kinda jumped right into it all kinda fast and the main characters along with the side character development seemed pretty rushed and the overall world building was also kinda not there and one more thing that female childhood friend / female boss just got kidnapped and it feels more like she was forgotten instead of getting stronger to rescue type of vibe I’m only giving my piece just so maybe in the future it might help you better I’m not criticizing to put you down but to maybe help in some form to get better novels this one is good compared to others because a lot of others just don’t care and I can see that you have taken time to review others so you can refine your own work and I thank you very much for that !
the author is trying too hard every scene is filled with so many obscure descriptions than you can hardly tell what's happening he tried his best to write a good story but overcorrected and needs to tone it down a notch
I don't like the direct you took the story starting chapter 36. It's a bit disappointing. Without emotions, the MC is just a psychopath. Also, there isn't any character development for the MC, other than he feels hurt and in pain all of the time, and he hates the world. Also, throughout the chapters, there are a number of unexplained things that the MC can just do somehow with no explanation in the actual story of how he learned to do so. There are a lot of jumps in logic and sometimes you can't understand what the author is trying to get across in the moment. Also, Writing quality isn't very high, and it feels like it is written by someone who has English as a second language. It's an okay ******* story, but it's very difficult to give it a high rating.
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Disappointed!! ... .. ...... Hdhhdhdhshjsudhjs7jjjjjjxjzjzjjzjznzñBbzbznsnsbdhxhhxbsbsbsbsbdbdbbxbxbdbxbddbxbdbdbdbbddbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbbdbdshsjzhhdheududuisushbdhehzbbzbshdhhfhdhhdhhdhhxhhxbdbebhxhcbxbdbbbxdbbdbxbxhdhdhxhhddhdhdhhdhdhhxhdhdjdhdhdhhxhdhhchdhdhhdhchdhdhhshehxhhshxhhdhxhdhxhhxhxhdhdhdhhdhdhhshxhshxhhdhxhhdhxhhdjxjjshdhhxhxhdhhhhx
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