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Oh thee who is infinite
Oh thee who is only
From whom this world is
Oh thee who is not
O you who listens to all
O you from whom the knowledge came
O you from whom this void came
O you from whom the darkness came
O thee who is beyond time
O thee who is no one
O thee who cannot be touched
O thee whom part is
I pray to you
I chant of you
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It's a tale.
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Viết đánh giáI will be shameful enough as a Author to rate this novel with 5 🌟 but what can I do it's my book you. PLEASE SUGGEST A COOL NAME FOR MC . Let me know if anyone want some changes 😁 done . Hope you all like it and guys after 100 chapters .New chapter will be extended to 2K words . Thanks for reading
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NOTHING HERE IS HATE, ALL JUST CRITISISM. Also please read the whole review. So. The overall story is good and the idea is even better. But there still are some things i‘d like to point out. 1. There are to many authors notes. I dont really think they‘re necessary. 2. The reading experience is good, but sometimes you get interrupted by a misspelled word or something that got autocorrected. Its not taking much time to proof read once or twoce and correcting errors. 3. The story is pretty rushed sometimes and it could use some more detail here and there. Now some things that are rather just some personal stuff i prefer/questions about choices did in the book. 1. Why did he block his whole power? 2. Where did the system come from? 3. Please try and make speaking people more obvious, like this: „Hello!“, he said. I know this is the case a lot of the time, but it would be easier if you wouldnt use [] sometimes. 4. For the love of god please dont use emojis. Please keep in mind that the lower ones could also come from me not reading carefully enough. Also i guess that you‘re writing on your phone, wich could explain some of the mistakes. Please try and correct those mistakes, the potential is really big!
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oh ya finally someone IS WRITING A NOVEL LIKE THIS THANK U AUTHOR PLEASE RELEASE MORE CHAPTERS AND DON'T DROP. THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER AND PLEASE START THE STORY FOR REAL THIS TIME. I AM WAITING. THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER.