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a teenager wakes up in an island in the middle of nowhere as Gojo Satoru
later he finds out that he is inside the world of one piece .
let's his journey to becoming the strongest
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Viết đánh giáIt's pretty nice tbf, Character Writing towards Gojo is pretty accurate. Since Gojo is Egotistical and Egocentric. But one thing is Gojo would never train, he would just be Arrogant until someone defeats him and gets humbled. Other than that, pretty good story telling, but please my guy, fix your grammar, you're putting dots and commas where they shouldn't be, you're also misspelling words, and other important stuff. Other than that keep working hard and don't give up! Don't forget to re-read your chapters before Uploading.
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I came here to fulfill my destiny by giving my fanfic 5 five stars