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The first ranker
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A college student was on his way to his home when suddenly his vision started darkening and he heard a voice [ First user found initiating synchronization]...... assualted by a massive headache he collapsed in the middle of the street not knowing that he just received the first system in the world.
this is a story about how the world first react to the changes that mana brings to the world and how they treat the people who can use mana the story is about how the protagonist Aiden discovers the evolution (apocalypse) before it happens and how he reacts to it and trains so that he can save his loved ones and embark on his journey to survive the evolution (apocalypse).
[ this is my first time writing a webnovel so if you have any suggestions write it down in the comments ]
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am a newbie author and its my first novel. I hope you guys call out my mistakes and in return i can improve my writing skills and improve while i am writing this novel if you have any suggestions or events you would like to see in the novel write it down in the comments and i will see it and respond and if you have any questions i will try my best to answer it