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THIS NOVEL HAS BEEN PAUSED
"Why do I exist? What is my purpose? does everyone have a purpose?" these are the questions everyone has thought about at least once in their lives, whether it's because everyone around them is pressuring them or of their own anxiety and feeling that they themselves are worthless and their life is meaningless.
Our protagonist (14 male) Kiko Tensei has long accepted his life has no meaning and has dedicated his life to simply having fun. Although there is a mild issue, he has gotten completely bored of every game he played he completed with ease and is looking for a new way to satiate his thirst for fun.
During this search he is introduced to boxing, although he is better than the average beginner, there is a limit to how far talent can take someone. intrigued by this dangerous sport he decided to give it ago...
{Please note this is my first novel and I'll try uploading every day and improve everyday}
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I love the plot. I have never seen a boxing novel or any piece of media like it. The writing is decent. I would recommend more descriptive paragraphs and concise dialogue. I also recommend not throwing the characters' appearance in an awkward spot. For example, when Brett gets introduced, his appearance doesn't flow well with the paragraph. Overall it has an exciting plot and good writing style, and if you're looking for a sports novel, check this out! Good job, author!