Tóm tắt
The continent of Ils, where magic is the main power of every human being, various kingdoms protect the continent from monster attacks.
Magic is so glorious on this continent, then comes one figure who is the destination of everyone, having magic so powerful that it is able to destroy the city with just one spell he is known as the master of magic.
Each person has different magic, the magic element is divided into seven kinds namely Fire, Water, Wind, Earth, Lightning, Light and Darkness. Every human being has their own magic core that has 10 000 forms.
Away from the frenzy of fighting between monsters and humans, a young man with a magic core in the form of a book is working hard to learn his first magic. Having an element of darkness the young man's figure is seen gasping for exhaustion as a result of training so hard, not far from the young man the middle-aged figure sees the young man with anger.
Ariya Pino was the name of the young man, born to a normal family but he had a large mana until he became the center of attention in his village.
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The father is useless and almost killed his own son. The mc isn’t smart and doesnt seem to have any eq at all. Despite the overpowered tag the MC is quite weak and almost died to almost 4 different animals which are considered “F grade”. And modtly the father is really stupid. You’d thuink that with years in the military gave him some sense of eq or iq. but no, he puts a huge seal on his sons magic, (the mc almost dies from unsealing the seal), and although it is wildly known that magicians are looked up to, he tried to seal his own sons magic just cause “I dont want what happened to ur mother happen to you”. :/ just overall it was very excruciating to even read past 20 chaps.
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I really like the plot. These kind of stories just so happens to be my cup of tea. its just hard to read. The obvious grammatical errors can be overlooked but for me, it's the flow of the story that bothers me. The story seems either rushed or forced in just the first chapter. my advice; slow it down a little some to describe the settings or wut the characters look, but keep up the good work 👍👍 if you keep writing I'll keep reading.
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The story is great but the translation makes me feel stupid. There are sentences and words that doesnt make any sense at all and its annoying
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Hi, Guys. This is my first novel, there's still a lot of mistakes in it. I hope you can all enjoy it, and I hope you give me some criticism so I can make this novel even better.