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Being a bottom feeder in society is an unpleasant experience.
That's how Kiro felt after being left for dead in a back alley. Abandoned and disappointed by the 'work hard' ethic his parents left for him.
'At least the heavens are weeping for me.' As the light from his eyes faded, he declared as the last act of defiance.
He awoke in a room he hadn't seen in ten years. Whether it was due to sheer luck or divine intervention, he was grateful.
'Through the VR game, Asgard, I'll become filthy rich in this life time.'
Kiro was blissfully unaware that his return was a cry for something greater, for the underlying threats that hovered over his world.
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@chapter 1 i can already feel that mc is a dog,not worth my,if you guys dont't like loser MC's like this better not waste your time reading this
Reading the title and all, I thought this was going to be a boring geographic novel (dunno why I thought so, I am dumb) Anyways, the author sure surpassed my expectations. Great work Author.
Firstly, the concept of the novel seems intriguing and full of potential. The idea of exploring a world where humans have evolved due to a catastrophic event and the juxtaposition of advanced technology and human greed is a captivating premise that could attract readers. Secondly, the main character's journey of self-discovery and redemption through his second chance at life could make for a compelling story. The mystery surrounding his return and the world he finds himself in creates an engaging plot that could keep readers hooked. Finally, my advice would be to focus on creating well-developed characters and an immersive setting that transports readers to this futuristic world. Consider exploring themes of human nature, morality, and the consequences of our actions, which could add depth and meaning to the story. Overall, keep writing and exploring the possibilities of this unique and exciting world you have created. 👍
Enjoying this a lot so far, I've found the story engaging enough with an interesting premise and execution. Hope the author can continue writing this and it's not dropped some day.
Among the new novels out there, this one really shines like a beacon. Although there are some amateurish writing here and there, the plot premise and overall storyline is great! My only complaint is that Earth doesn’t have interstellar travel even thousands of years in the future. For a sci-fi fan, it sure hurts… Still, a great novel with superb potential!
Sounded interesting in the summary, though, after reading a few chapters i cant get interested enough in the MC to continue, but the biggest probem for me is the world building, even if the story is 2000 years in the future humanity stagnated in the 20th century, no matter how much you want to play victim and blame the world technology will aways bleed through all layers of society (just not a the same time) if not for the simple fact that we live in a capitalist economy (the same reason slavery ceased to exist, money trumps everything), so in summary the impression i have is that victim mentality not only shaped the MC but also the World
This book is really well written so far(chapter 71) hope you continue to put effort into keeping this updated.
I rarely review works but here we go. I actually really enjoy this book. The takes the author has on this style of genre is very freeing and one I haven't seen before. But I'm also stopping reading this book for now. I really did enjoy this book but it wasn't what I was looking for at the moment. I'll probably pick it back up when it has more chapters / I'm in the mood for the author's flare on the genre. 4.6/5 Good Job Author 😊
I really liked the novel so far and tbh the only thing that irritated me was the 30 day trip after beginner Village because of that girl and her friend.
it is a really good read but the skills leave no impression on me because ntge ranks feel unimportant mc gained a bunch of rank s skills that sounds ordinary with ordinary effects
This is a great piece. The character development is great, as well as the background amongst other things. I love how the plot is developed also.
A GOOD QUALITY , OUT OF SOME ROUTINE NOVELS THAT GOT THE SAME BASED STORY EVERY TIME , I REALLY RECOMMEND THIS
I love this novel. It’s one of the good ones of this platform but that’s the problem. IT’S TOO GOOD. I want more but I’m poor so I can’t buy coins for chapters. I can only unlock 3 chapters a day via adds so please I beg you add more free chapters For those who are asking why and how is this novel good well firstly the Mc is likeable(in my opinion) and the character interactions don’t feel awkward or strained to me. Also where I’m at (chapter 71) all characters actually have a brain in issues and it’s not a problem that can be solved easily that will be prolonged for idk struggle even though it really isn’t. Back to the point there are issues that can’t be solved with simple solutions. Sorry if this didn’t really make sense going to sleep soon. Last message give more free chapters I beg you.
easy to read, intriguing world mysteries, interesting game world with its own separate (?) mysteries, funny and heartwarming character moments
disclaimer- this is not a review. This is just to help out the author. In the synopsis the last line states "treats" where I assume threats is meant to be. I am not nitpicking just pointing it out to see how many people noticed it without glossing over it accidentally. :)
This book is well organized, I love the tension and mystery it brings. It's very intriguing and I'm excited to read more. Kudos to you author 👍
Just started reading it, still at level Fourteen but this story is the real deal
Nice book you have hear. Everything is proceeding smoothly. Keep it up author👍
I'll be shameless just this once and rate my own novel. 😅 This is my first ever attempt at getting my writing out there. As expected, it's nerve-wracking. I hope you enjoy reading it as much I loved writing it. Thank you for your support.