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Tóm tắt

On a certain normal day, Genos suddenly received a message telling him that he became an Admin of an All-Girls' Chat Group. He thought that it was just a normal one but when things start to get strange, the group chat he was pulled in may not be normal after all.

With things already this far, should he stop or should he continue? Where would this lead him?




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Writing Prompts Contest #76: Chatgroup - Winner Rank 1!!

Just a fluke but I will try my best to make it worth your time.

Release Rate: Once a Day/Saturday Two Chapters/Sunday no chapter

Chapter Length: 1000~1500

Note: English is not my first language and I am very bad with grammar especially the tenses and making dialogues. So if there are any problems, please remember to leave a review or comment down your suggestion or advice.

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LazyTiany

Though I don't have to I still want to give my story a review and this is the most honest I can get. Hey! Even though I have to be honest I still have to be confident with my work, I mean, I worked hard writing it so it is only natural. So here's a heads up for my readers and the future readers. [1] Obviously, it's a harem so I am warning those that are harem haters or those that don't really like harem to be aware. Though I promise you guys that it would be natural or as logical as I can but I will possibly make some mistake so please spare me from harsh criticism. [2] I will be making the MC not too OP but at the same time, he will get strong very fast and will have a lot of luck and what I mean by a lot is a lot. If you know the MC of Motto to Love Ru cause I forgot his name but we all know that he would be always in perverted situations. So my MC will also have that same kind of luck but not in a perverted way. [3] There is a system but it does not have an AI which can respond or have any feelings. It would also not control the MC with the quest as the MC will have the right to reject it in the future. [4] I am not really a good writer so I expect you guys to be nice to me when I make a mistake. Please don't leave any harsh criticism like telling me to stop writing or something similar as that would lower my confidence in writing and end up ending this novel. I can accept criticism as long as it is reasonable and it is my wrong but if it ends up being just a troll then I will try my best not to be discouraged. [5] Lastly, I am only writing as I go so there is no definite plot so any suggestions are much appreciated. I know that having no plan in advance will lead a story to its doom but please help me when I do get in trouble. I am still a beginner so I have not much experience in writing.

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5yr
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Hamada

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Chymbee

The story starts slow but when you start reading you will found yourself wanting more. Even though I cannot say that this is addicting but I really want to read more.

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UnknownPasserby

I, for one, really like this story so I hope that it will not be dropped and be continued until it ends. Though there are things that need to be improved the author still did a good job in his work. Just some edits and it will be great, so all I could say is - Great Work!

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SangN123

Slow start but its gettin better. MC not going the sister route I hope and best regard if so... Current character right now are OC (I think) that will have the MC battling it out like a world walker is and can be top notch with a certain skill he has! Romantic bits have not occured but some jelly though. MC is not a flirt and will more likly stumble here and there but over all he is a good guy. HaremgodGenos... oh how he path be tricky and paved untold

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Great story! Please, continue release more chapter ................................................................................................................................

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yZin
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CliffkunLolRekt

Really good keep up the good work and chap rate lol Have more confidence in yourself author bro your doing Great man also #demonlordmilf #mostlymilfharem

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Shiroggane

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hunter_england

I wish they would put the manga on here to read because once the app i had shut down I couldn't find it. If they added it here I would probably reread from the start

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AwronZizao

Dunno if I wanna read this to be honest. The chapters are seriously short, I can get over it. The story is incredibly slow-going. Then the fact he phone glows a bright light and changes into a new phone and he DOESN'T check it out at all!? I'm sorry, Author are you confused in the head? Who wouldn't check out their phone after that, even if they were going out for a day with their sister.. just check it out whilst walking around with her..?

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