/ Urban / Tangling with the Western Commander
Tóm tắt
This is a story of a captain of a secluded place and a gorgeous female celebrity—both who would hardly cross paths but a collision in Tibet sets an opening to their encounter.
Upon their first encounter, Wenxian already has her eyes set on Captain Lu—her mouth drooling with desire.
Wenxian, “Hmm? How can I win over your heart? In a plain sack or using sweet talk?”
With a cigarette in his mouth, Lu Xiao scoffs. “You are an impressive and popular celebrity, I am only a captain at this secluded place. I am very poor, what is it in me that you like about?”
Wenxian, “I like how you always snub back at me.”
Lu Xiao choked and walked away heartlessly. “You are shameless, don’t even dream about it!”
The next day, he said, “It's all because you were carried away by a whim?”
Wenxian, “No, hatching a scheme.”
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A refreshing FL in a sea full of innocent, sweet and kind MC. The one with an unrestrained and willful personality. While we've got a ML with great self-control (that seems to be breaking now). Still acting like he doesn't want her. I want to know when will the ML let himself go with the flow. And I also wanna see more of what our MC have in her sleeves to break his self-control. Hshshs.
Nice story I really enjoy reading this novels it nice one author please continue to update this book I am now addicted to this book nice try keep it up.
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I seriously love the ML and FL, their different we don’t have the typical overbearing and cold ML, he’s cold has self restraint but not overbearing, hes kinda shy. And the FL is not kind and Extremely shy and delicate refusing her feelings or whatever, shes more agressive in this relationship and she hypocritical, lacks kindness and straightforward.
**Review as of 39 chapters** I usually leave a review after the first 60 chapters but no coins/passes right now and I have to get it off my chest as I went through the free chapters fast. This is a novel about an actress and a soldier who meets in Tibet. She trespasses into a restricted access part of the area and was injured in an accident. The ML was the one was dressed up her wound for her. FL was upset that he saw her naked and there starts the fued between the two. She's a popular actress with a good body (curves, tall, c cup) and so she flaunts it to ML knowingly. She can probably come off too strong and annoying. I can imagine this as a drama and she starts about being mouthy and bratty making viewers annoyed by her character. ML is our quiet, muscular, law abiding, and stubborn captain. He doesn't say much but somehow still oozes *** appeal to our FL. I don't know how some readers will take the sexual aspects of this novel. I feel like it could be a little try hard or enjoyable to read, depending on how you view this topic. I felt both at different points of the story. What I liked about it so far: 1. Her personality. It adds humor to the story due to how she is so full of herself. How she takes action to try to catch the ML's attention and seduce him. 2. It's not a new plotline but it is a breath of fresh away from the usual themes of transmigration, evil sister, horrible family, etc. I like to see a variety of storylines on this platform, even if the plot isn't new. 3. It's a lighthearted read so far because there's not a lot of dark and sad themes 4. No rape scene so far. A forced kiss was given though 5. The style of writing makes it easy for me to paint drama like scenes in my head. It's not my favorite style to read though. Dislikes so far: 1. The writing/translation isn't the best. I don't care too much about grammatical errors as I make TONS of those. There are times when I'm reading and I'm confused on what's going on due to how certain things are word/structured in the sentence or between. It could seem choppy and makes me diverts my attention away from the story to understand what's going on. 2. Chapters are super short meaning that there's not much being written to expand the plot. Leading to the next dislike.... 3. Lack of details. I feel like I've totally skipped over character and background introduction of these characters and plotline. I don't need lengthy unnecessary chapters but we don't know much about these characters at all. For example, when the ML asks the grandpa what be thinks of the FL, he said that she's a hypocrite and is two-faced but she's not a bad person. We never really got to see how she's a hypocrite because all she did was bicker with the ML and seduce him. The author just uses character's dialogue or thoughts to tell us but we could use some details in the scenes. Ex: we know she cooked with the aunt, maybe show another side of her through this instead of just saying she cooked with the aunt. I can tell the author is trying to depict the FL as a misunderstood bad girl who's actually good at heart but we don't get scenes to prove that. (I feel like I'm being redundant now. I'm sure you get the point). Side note: FL seems to have some hidden cool girl talents like the kick she sent the ML and her driving skills. Sadly not too much details. Despite that rant, I honestly really enjoyed reading the first set of free chapters. I gave it low ratings because even if I like it and it continues to get translated, I don't think it would be worth the coins/passes. There's so many other novels as its competitor. I don't know how the rest will play out though as everything is played so fast without details. I can't imagine 500+ chapters of this novel for some reason. Like I can't tell which direction the author will take it. I would love to continue reading if it gets picked and will comeback to do an updated review. Best of luck to this one. What were your guy's thoughts and opinions so far? Would love to hear it as well.
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I love the novel!! !it's still ongoing though so Im not sure how long it will be. It still on 700++ marks It's really refreshing reading a strong FL fall in love in ML and fight for it. And no male abuse big ego as well 😂😂 of course there are up and downs between them and I do wish FL talk more to ML rather than being too considerate and create problem later 😂 but it's a minor thing and most often than not they're so in sync with each other. I would say it's an easy love story with all the bad part comes from their visible enemy. It good for me because I kinda hate the whole misunderstanding plot between FL/ML and their admirer.
(As of 13 ch) Anyone watched "Crash Landing on You"? The first couple of episodes. It has the vibes of entitled, rich, "im a queen" Seri who gets into forbidden territory and then gets upset at everyone who's doing their jobs. Entitled superstar FL x soldier ML. Don't ship them. He deserves better lmao. FL throws a giant tantrum and flaunts her status when she's caught and is upset with ML for changing her clothes (not caring that he saved her superstar skin from scars and gave her the needed first aid) 🙄 ML is your typical cold soldier dude but he clearly has a soft spot for FL (who knows why lmao her character isn't lovable at all, so it must be her body). Anyways, they'll probably fall in love but I won't be here for it. FL is trash.
Summary...too good, I'm going to chapter 609 and I'm in love with this novel, very out of the ordinary, our FL is strong, funny and a little cold-hearted, but her heart is warming thanks to our ML. ML very serious, straight and with a high self-control, obviously everything goes to hell when he meets FL. But in this novel you will find that they fall in love as they meet in time and not like in others that inexplicably ML changes everything for FL. The character growth is very good and they manage to overcome all the misunderstandings, dangers, ups and downs of their relationship a bit quickly (without giving us so much anguish). If you like dog food, fluff, comedy and a bit of action this novel is your cup of tea, highly recommended. Another plus point that the story begins when FL is already a famous star (skipping all that drama)
why taking break 😭😭😭😭😭 , it's so refreshing but it stop this is sooo bad ...... but I'm gonna add in my library 🤫..... I'm in love with this novel ~~🌼🌼🌼🌼🌼🌼 wait wait waiting ~~~~
wwwooohhhh....both main characters are so good...cant get enough of them... bt its in break for 1 year... please update... ****waiting for update....
I love this story but I also have a big complaint. I really can't stand how the story skips the kissing and smut parts, it's too much. I don't know if it's the author's or translator's fault but it is really annoying to get hyped up only to end up disappointed. Otherwise, this story is a delightful change from the usual. The characters are not copypasted from other novels and the FL is not a saint who is too good for this world.
Its so witty!!!! 🤣🤣🤣 The fierce Interaction between them is so sexy and funny. Its a matter of time before the ML admits that he is moved 💫
Oh my Gosh!!!!! Read through all the stocked chapters in two days!!!! This novel made me smile, made me laugh and made me cry so hard!!! I'm talking about the raws by the way...😉 Super recommend it to anyone!!!
The first 60 chapters got me wanting for more... the FL is seriously a crack up!!! she makes me laugh out loud!!! I'm off to the raws!!! I give this novel an A+ as of now...
i love this book so much ❤️♥️💙💙💙♥️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ nice work
I love this book so much aside from the past of the FL the story is a bomb! This storyline is really my type I'd really be happy if this book gets selected💖
I enjoyed the story line and will read more at a later date. Thus id a neat app. I am glad I found this app to be able to read these bills.
I have really enjoyed what I have read so far. the character development is on point and seems like the story line is solid and will hopefully continue.
Wow! Just wow. The female lead seems like a villainess initially m. But I really like her character trait. She is straight forward. Not overly weak m, she is already established in her field. And as far as meetings go between her and the Male lead, this is the best so far on Webnovel. This novel is DIFFERENT I repeat. It is worth your time and effort. No cliches this far. I am excited for more. Please read and review.