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Tales of Asura (FF Version)
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So I keep making stories that I keep dropping, rewriting, or putting on hiatus forever. And that is partially my fault. So now I am making this my own Skeleton Crew or One Thousand and One Arabian Nights or Black Mirror. Oh yeah, it is called an anthology. A collection of short stories and one-shots. This is the fanfiction one and there is also an original story one.
If you enjoy the stories and want longer versions, comment. I just might make it happen. But don't expect anything longer than 20 chapters unless I get really inspired.
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It is not a bad fic, but I think it needs more attention and to go deeper, almost nothing is explained, how his life has been before awakening his powers, his way of thinking, his goals, his relationship with close people, etc. He also entered Xavier's school but everything was fast, in only two or three chapters, his interactions with the other characters were not seen, he got a girlfriend and we did not know how, we did not even see a single dialogue with her, nor does she appear, part of the deaths and separation of the x-men, you only mentioned it and that's it, so it's a story with an interesting idea, but poorly worked, it's practically a summary of what happens and now (just my opinion), of all the anyways, good luck! (Google translator).
i like the concept and the story itself .so dont drop it and keep the good work..........,............... . ............... ........
This seems interesting. i have not seen any marvel fan fiction that have took this approach with the x men. Great strarting and I hope that you can continue this fanfiction.👍👍
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.