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After a million years, the system finally obtains a body to complete one goal: ascending to godhood!
What kind of journey lay ahead and what obstacles did she need to overcome?
How many young masters will become victims of her divine slap?
How many times does she turn common sense upside down?
How many people have an eye but fail to recognize Mt. Tai?
Follow her journey from becoming a human until she leaps through the dragon gate and becomes an unrivaled goddess.
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Viết đánh giáA great novel with an incredible potential. The world building is rich and intriguing. I'm actually quite frustrated by the low number of chapters because I feel the greatness that this story can reach. It's also the first time that I've been moved by a story on this platform therefore I'm very eager to read the rest of this story (^w^)/. Keep the good work, author. You have something precious between your hands ^_^.
Lovin the book so far! Especially the idea of having an almighty system gain human form and then cultivate while also learning about emotions. With Yuri added to the mix it's pretty much a masterpiece!
So far, I'm really enjoying the book, even though it is still in it's early stages. Seeing Snowy's journey through emotions has already been extremely fun, and the other characters are great as well. Plus it yuri, which is great because, well, yuri.
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Wow, the author was an amazing entertainer! I didn't bore out in a sec! With more readers, I am sure this will be a hit! ADVICE None! the author was a better author than me...hahaha
I love everything about this story, super sad to see that it was last updated so many months ago. I hope it gets updated again eventually, either way thanks for writing such an enjoyable story thus far!
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I like this novel it is interesting and a new ideas and plots in it the grammar is good well at least better than mine it could do grate if it has more frequent updates
A cultivation novel with the system. well, there's few complications in the system with female lead. its a novel where you get everything you look for in a system-cultivation book, there's fast growth, face slapping... the writings are clear and there's not much errors in it, the author made a great effort in that. Overall good luck author with the story.
I enjoy reading it so far. Although it is very cliche, the author seems to nerf down the MC a bit. Her character also a little bit boring, hopefully she will developed into more interesting character. The FL is quite good. rather than MC, she is easier to relate with. All in all, its was a good read and I cannot wait for next chapter!
So far so good. Although, I have read only a few chapters I am sure I am already in love with the book. More chapter, pleaaseeee...... 😘😘😘😘😘
I really enjoyed reading this, the characters are fun and the mc’s naivety is has brought a smile to my face on a few occasions, the grammar and punctuation could use a few touch ups but its ten times better then a lot of stuff on here, overall its great☺️
It's an interesting read, hard to find good female lead stories out there, even hard to find good female lead yuri stories, so this was definitely an enjoyable read.
When the war of the beasts brings about the world's end The goddess descends from the sky Wings of light and dark spread afar She guides us to bliss, her gift everlasting
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Tiết lộ SpoilerI rate you 5 stars. everything is good, especially the story development. nothing to complain about because when I read, I can feel myself there to enjoy. since everything is easy to understand, typos or errors are just nothing. hahaha good job author, keep on writing ^^ God bless you!
Came in with big hope for a original cultivation novel, and after reading about 50chapter it somewhat is, but not to the degree i hoped. The world is like almost every cultivation story is. Writing quality is very good for webnovel and so far the plot is very catching. My problem is the MC and her companion. I had hoped for a story where someone would start out more robotic and trubles connection with emotion, but by chapter 10, the MC is already in love with her companion. From there the story takes a strange turne where everything feels like it's trying to rush in to a relationship and romance without building the characters one bit. Rushing for romance and lemons is the sad end for so many potential good cultivation novels.
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please update more i absolutely love this story ❤ 💗 💖 💕 ♥ 💜 ❤ 💗 💖 💕 ♥ 💜 ❤ 💗 💖 💕 ♥ 💜 ❤ 💗 💖 💕 ♥ 💜 ❤ 💗 💖 💕 ♥ 💜 ❤ 💗 💖 💕 ♥ 💜 ❤ 💗 💖
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Another shameless 5-stars review from author. Do you like Yuri? Do you like OP MC with System? Do you like Cultivation World where Young Master ruthlessly slapped? Just give it a try, you will get a triple-delight!