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Jack gets transmigrated into the MC of Summertime Saga. With very little help and his knowledge of the game seems to be less then what he remembered. How will he handle the Russian mob and all the ladies in town.
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Viết đánh giáSolid Summertime Saga fanfic, it's a bit early to review considering there's only about 13 chapters as of reading this but I like what I'm reading. Not to mention Eve is the cover pic and is the route the mc is going first. Plus all the other Summertime Saga fics in this platform are either dropped, in hiatus, in a different language or have bad grammar. Hope this continues!
Writing quality: understandable, though there are some some parts that dont make sense or dont sound good World background: same, though the MC get way too much money for the jobs he does in the game. Also, one gallon of gasoline is $40 and a cheap camera is $60 Character design: MC starts to develop some backbone after ch 6 or 7, but he also wants to use Judith and then dump her on Erik so thats kinda lame Story development: almost exact copy untill chapter 6 or 7
A história parece uma repetição do jogo, mas pelo menos é Interessante e é possível ver o desenvolvimento do autor já que no início ele estava basicamente repetindo tudo do jogo mas nos últimos capítulos apesar de existir uma repetição também é possível ver o surgimento de um enredo que não parece apenas uma cópia do jogo.
Previus day, another AU Novel of Summertime Saga end up dead because of the author private problems. And thanks to of the one of the readers im now reading this one.
It's interesting so far, I hope for a development with Eve and Roxxy!.......................................................................
Very well until now it continues like this🤙 And if I played the game 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵
Tiết lộ SpoilerAmazing writing, and a good level of conversational detail, although longer, more in depth conversions between characters would improve the quality. All in all you're an amazing writer. Keep up the good work:)
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You give us a good STS story my dude. That's how i like it!Eve is the best girl. Diane is the best Milf.Just my opinions.
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