Stuck In The Cyberverse

Just because of DDLC... you already earned a five star to me! Ngl DDLC was literally the first game I played in PC... I even cried when I finished playing it. Man... and that's why you deserve a Five Star author!PS: Please save Sayori and Yuri... Monika best girl!

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AdamFlores

I appreciate this story. DDLC stories are not only rare, but the main characters of these stories are either obsessed with saving the girls, or they are shy and meek and always get led around Monika. So it is quite refreshing to see a story like this with a MC that actively flirts with the girls and isn't a stuttering virgin. The premise is also great, not being restricted to the DDLC universe and having the potential ability to travel to other game worlds... Well, it is certainly great that this is a harem, because let's be honest, having access to a multitude of universe and not taking advantage of that and forming a harem would just be... stupid. The only thing I hope for is for the characters to actually have romantic development, and not just get collected by the MC like pokemon. But this is something that until now, hasn't been a problem, and I can see that the author is certainly not going down this path, so there is no need to be worried about this aspect The only complain I have is the update stability. Writing fiction is hard, I would know, but it's a bit frustrating to have a chapter every two days, and then suddenly, weeks pass without a single chapter. Author, my advice to you would be to upload a chapter a week. It would allow you to have a more stable schedule, and it would also give you more time to write, or review chapters. You can tweak it around as you see fit, but if you can't write consistently, just keep some chapters in stock, and hold on to them, just in case. I don't know your situation, do with that advice as you'd like, but always remember that having a stable update schedule is important. Of course, it is your own work, so no pressure here, I just hope helps you, as I certainly want to read more of this story that you have created

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TheLostSupreme

Good. I recommend giving it a try. Even if it's short, it's still good. Just Monika for the win!

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Darkmusho

I love Doki Doki literature club can't wait to see what you do with this.

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Ireallylikereading

DDLC NO WAY, OK THATS IT YOU CAN HAVE IT, doki doki literature club is so good yet rarely does anyone use it, this work doesnt even have to be good to have my support, heck the only expectation for me is that you dont mess things up.

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aiden_rivera

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GustPigey

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Luddic_Path

Man's cooking with pure promethium just as the Emperor intended 10/10 would wait for updates again

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Originally_dead

it is an interesting idea. and it started with ddlc, which is a plus for me as it seems ddlc is not so... common here i will make another review as it updates and if the author sees this, i hope you continue this

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Lacuna_Kimono

So again I know you probably heard but because of the ddlc you earned 5*, I would like to know if you have a update schedule for this book?

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Shoggoth

It looks very promising so far. I wonder which path the author will follow.... Or if it will be another story in limbo.

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MrSimo

I was getting to like the story and all the interesting plot developments, but after the author turned the story into a harrem I lost interest. good first 25 chapters though.

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Lukas_dark

great work. my suggestion for some game worlds to visit: skyrim, fear and hunger, terraria, noita, life is strange. also i hope that the harem will only remain with the ddlc girls

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Avispatres_3

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