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Strength of Will (A BNHA x Undertale FanFic)
4.65 (34 số lượng người đọc)
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After Frisk finally managed to bring peace to her universe a certain glitchy skeleton appeared out of nowhere and erased it from existence, but luckily the goddesses Fate and Destiny found her Soul and decided to let her reincarnate, what will Frisk do? And will she be able to stay a pacifist...
(I am not a native english speaker, so please forgive me for any spelling mistakes, this is also the first novel I am writing, so don't expect high quality stuff, this is just going to be some half-assed story, that I am writing because of quarantine, and I repeat DON'T EXPECT QUALITY!
Btw obvious DISCLAIMIER, I don't own BNHA or Undertale and the cover art was made by Patzzi and reedited by Solunary.)
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From my time of writing this the story is starting off at a descent pace and the author is doing a great job on updates and character building. There are a few spelling errors but they can be easily fixed so overall this is a great fanfic crossover and I am exited for improvements is storytelling cuz it will help keep some readers from being distracted by the errors and keep them invested in the story. Keep up the good work author and take care of urself cuz I’ve seen authors burnout in their writing. :)
I honestly didn't have High expectation with the Fanfic but the more i read the more Interested i am Reading but there still Confusing stuff and some Grammar mistake Overall its really good hope you Continue Good Luck!!
I read this up to chapter 60 something (the part where she cross dresses and meets deku) and I was enjoying it. I was liking how the story was going and didn't see myself stopping until it was completed. I could look past the occasional mistakes because my mind would already pronounce it correctly, so it didn't bother me. love the progression. you could see how she develops as a person as time goes on and all the friends she makes from being a loner. What I liked in particular was how the Chara? ended a potential antagonist before he even had the chance to do anything, just that alone secured my loyalty. Absolutely loved it. Until chapter 59 or somewhere around there. I personally felt the story was going great until she decided to let herself get bullied. like she for real was letting them lay into her so she wouldn't have to deal with crowds. And then proceeds to beat them up! like the entire chapter was useless because she changes schools again, but this time she cross dresses. Now normally, I wouldn't care about it. I mean occasionally i read BL, even though I dont have a preference for it, so my dislike for Akane dressing up as a guy doesn't stem from any homophobia or shit like that. And the story feels like it all over the place. It's probably just me, but I feel like some of the ideas in the story were hastily put together, which somehow doesn't detract from the story, because it's a great read. But I feel like it's getting repetitive. Beautiful this, famous that, dislike of crowds , get beat up. these are all recurring themes.. anyway, I highly recommend for some slightly-not so slightly light reading. Plus its completed so its pretty much smooth sailing until the end.
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Giving a Review to help you get rated? I haven't actually read anything of this novel yet, but it does seem interesting enough. I have it bookmarked! :3
This book has an interesting story and I want to see where the author takes it. The characters are fleshed out well enough and there is still some mystery in the book that makes you want to keep reading.
To be honest it's a great book, but it's a shame to be a fanfic. Seeing the low presence of the canon in the book, I believe that the author could have done much better with an original work in a similar scenario. Changing the name of some characters this book would stop being a fanfic and become an original. As a fanfic i give this book 3 stars because i can't see the canon here at all, but seeing as an original i can give 5 stars so my final rating is 4 stars.
The story is a great and one of the best reads I have had in a while. Additionally it also just makes me believe that characters from undertale like frisk will have bad times if they were placed in worlds like this one. And that there is a reason why undertale is separated from the rest of the Omniverse. Ether way it’s a great story good work. [img=recommend]
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okay. I am pretty familiar with this so..... First off: writing quality, I really couldn't have done it any better than you. so, congrats. 2nd: story development, there really isn't any more I can say, other than you did this fantastically. 3rd: character design, in this regard I can say that you have done better than some famous authors that I know of, and that says a lot. 4th: updating stability. I can't give a higher rating for this because I have not personally received an update. 5th: world background. fantastic, outstanding, breathtaking, superb, I can go on and on about how good your world background is and is not I have seen better I have read better but, the reason why you are getting the maximum rating for world background is that you gave enough background to the my hero academia world without giving away too many spoilers of the anime for those that have not seen it yet and still managed to set the stage. and I must say I am very very pleased with how the story turned out. lastly, do your best to take care of yourself in these troubled times don't overwork yourself either.
The reboot is even better and i didnt even think that was physically possible. All thats left to say is: NIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICE
A few warnings to people who are going to read this book: the amount of sadness anger and hatred you are going to feel will make you want to stop reading at least once. The music links are useless because this website/app refuses to let you select text for things other than comment and share, so if you want the full experience dont read on your phone. Now for the actual review I have for this: If someone is bad, expect them to have no moral compass. The character development is great, I rarely find that I can’t imagine what someone looks like. Story development is ALOT of reading, you go through the main characters entire life story. World development is: take what you already know from the anime, prepare for a deep dive into media manipulation politics, and then realize this book is getting a reboot with an editor onboard so everything you know from reading this book may or may not be as much of a lie as the cake. I honestly just love the fact that this book is good without a system or harem while having more than 50 chapters avaible for binge reading, its hard to find that on this app.
Good afternoon dear author: I am writing you to say goodbye because for external reasons, it is very likely that I can no longer read your story. This is why I want you to know that I liked it a lot and I want to give you my support and thanks for having made an effort to create it, and although I am no longer there to give you my gratitude comment, I want to say "Thank you very much for the chapter" for all future chapters you decide to do. And although I do not have much time, I want to express to you that I really enjoyed the content that you dedicated to writing since it is not easy to find good stories like yours. Thank you very much for everything, I hope you have a happy life and that I hope you can continue writing incredible stories like this. Goodbye.
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I'm a big fan of undertale, and seeing a fanfic so great like this made me wanted to play undertale again. And even though Yuri isn't my cup of tea, I like this book. Keep the good work author :)
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Haven’t started yet but found this while hearing Undertale soundtrack “His Theme” 😂 I give you 5 start only for the coincidence 😂😂😂 Hope I enjoy it!
you should add the slice of life tag _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I never played Undertale... Well that will change tonight. I have never heard of a pacifist hero before. This will be interesting. This story reminds BNHA that you don't need a Quirk to be a hero. With c16 we can see ACTION. But i would rather focus on the Music. Either way, I love your main protaganist. MOE!!!!