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Idora Dea was a member of the hero's party that observed the hero's Journey from beginning to end.
She was with him when he grew up, and she was there when he was selected as the hero.
She was there when he defeated the demon lord.
Her contribution to the fight was not inferior to his, but what awaited her at the end wasn't praise, it was scorn.
As a withering flower at the end of her life, she didn't regret a single decision, but right before she could pass on to the land of the dead, a blue window appeared in front of her...
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Viết đánh giáOkay, I am someone who appreciates a good story with equally good writing. I see some mistakes here and there but I'll give it a pass because of the quality of the story. The first 3 chapters gets you emotionally invested with the mc, the one thing I have wrong with this is that all we know of the her first life is that he is very relatable (no context needed). Chapters 10-12 (what there currently is) gives you a better view of the mc and the aftereffects of their 2nd life. Stability of updates is fine because I see constant edits here and there, so I don't mind. As a hobbyist writer I can relate. Anyway, good story 9/10 so far. Going through my 3rd reread now.
Uh is it just me or did you take parts from the accelerator touhou fic? Pretty sure some of the parts are almost parallels to the touhou accelerator fic I think?
This is amazing. Its wonderfully told and crafted, making me want to continue reading more. I’ve read plenty of Touhou fanfics but I can easily say that this one is in the top 10 list of the best I’ve read. Can’t wait until you upload more chapters!
A story that so far (3 chapters) is incredible! Excellent writing, great world development, charismatic protagonist, characters are well developed and much more. I just can't say how faithful the story is to the source material, as I don't know much about Touhou. Overall I have nothing to complain about this story...other than the current lack of more chapters (。•̀ᴗ-)✧
Beautiful. Within the first two chapters I was gobsmacked, rarely have I seen fanfics with such levels of ingenuity and art. The character has great continuity, her actions all making sense (some actions were also cleared up on the latest chapter 4) The story development and world background fermented like wine, and within the first two chapters I was drunk within a cacophony of words. Top tier, perhaps if the author continues to create work of similar quality for this book it would go into my favourites. Although for now we wait, we wait for the book to grow and the future plot to be unraveled.
Tác giả HopelessHikikomori
This is a fantastic example of how fanfiction can add depth and complexity to beloved characters and storylines. The author takes a minor character from the Touhou series and explores her motivations and backstory in a way that is both engaging and insightful. The writing style is clear and descriptive, capturing the emotions and actions of the characters in a way that feels authentic and true to the original source material. The dialogue is well-written, and the pacing is strong, with each scene building upon the last in a way that creates a sense of tension and anticipation. What really sets this fanfiction apart, however, is the way the author delves into the psychology of the character and their motivations. The story offers a fresh perspective on the character's experiences and backstory, shedding new light on their role in the larger narrative of the Touhou series. Overall, this Fanfic is a well-crafted and engaging fanfiction that offers readers a deeper understanding of a minor character in Touhou. Whether you're a die-hard fan of the series or simply enjoy well-written fiction, this fanfiction is well worth a read. One note though I want see moreeeee