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I was just an ordinary person in the world, a true loner with no friends and no relatives, I was hit by a comet and reborn in this strange world of Ninja’s, Yes into Narutoverse, but Instead of born in Konoha where all the events are happening I was born in Kumo as the son of 4th Raikage!!, the man who only talks reason with Iron claw!!.
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I don't own the Naruto and its characters, Kishimoto does. I am just shamelessly borrowing Narutoverse for a while.
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PS: English is not my first language, if you find any mistakes in my writing please comment, will try to correct it.
Thanks,
DJ
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I honestly love this fanfic. I like the fact that the main character is born in kumo, which is rare in naruto fanfics. Additionally, you give info on a clan that isnt really gone over, and likely said what would be said if kishimoto decided to go over the clan. The lightning chakra mode is a really cool justu in my opinion and is great for developing the main character physically and mentally. You should come back and continue to write this. Dont rewrite the current chapters, i think if you just keep writing them, you will slowly have better writing. Your writing is on the better side that ive seen on webnovel. TLDR: pls continue this fanfic, its great and has an insane amount of potential, which are wasting
Português:contínua cara 5 meses sem posta estou desapontado,se você continua ia ter um muitos leitores novos para ver essa história. .
The quality of the writing is quite good considering the perspective of other works. So far the book has a decent development of the story in the framework of the events that happens but I would like you to be careful with the chronological times and bring your book as close to reality as possible so that later on, a younger child does not come out. At 10 years, have the strength of a chunin or jounin which would be ridiculous. The downside here is the poor stability of the chapter updates. It is quite innovative that in the world that you decided to make the book, it was not born in some main character or with some bloodline in Konoha or, failing that, born in Konoha. It seems to me similar to an innovation that exists in this platform where the protagonist is born in the village of the rock.