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Survive, adapt and overcome in the world of shinobis while having a template that gives Jin the full edge lord experience.
Jin Kurama the black sheep of the Kurama clan will fall into obscurity or carve out his own path in the harsh environment of the shinobi world.
Mc has anger issues.
[Rated R-18 for violence, swear language and Gore.]
(The progress of this story will heavily depend on the authors mood swings, so save up your powerstones for other stories that you like.)
[Also tone down with the power stones on this story. I don't know when I'm going to loose interest and finished this story in the most butchered way possible. I repeat: this story is something I write because I felt like it and nothing else.]
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Хочу больше, я подсел как наркоман! Надеюсь на английском не надо шпарить, в крайнем случае гугл переводчик в помощь. Меня задело только отсутствие большего развитие персонажей и мира вокруг. Поясняю, например Блейд, нам рассказали в принципе мало о данном персонаже, а с условием того, что до получения своего имени он был до Лора в другой(оригинальной для персонажа) истории, это как и проблема, так и возможность вставить то, что хочешь. Ну, не считая контекста. Так как у героя только шаблон персонажа, можно вообще сделать как бы наложение опыта и воспоминаний Блэйда с героем,от любви, до её потери и связи с мечом. Всё это можно реализовать, и хорошо можно же вписать и грехи сюда, как действующая причина развития героя, ведь повышения уровня овладения Грехом, это побороть сие грех. Значит будет много возможностей для героя с подобным погружением. Насчёт мира:Это времена Какаши, нам известно чуть, но мне нравится твоя задумка с Хьюгой, что в итоге будет, узнаем. Да и в принципе побольше вот таких событий будет самое то. Благодарю за прекрасное чтиво, жду ещё! I want more, I'm hooked like a drug addict! I hope you don’t have to scramble in English; in extreme cases, Google Translator will help. The only thing that bothered me was the lack of more development of the characters and the world around them. Let me explain, for example, Blade, we were told, in principle, little about this character, and with the condition that before receiving his name he was before Lore in another (original for the character) story, this is both a problem and an opportunity to insert what you want . Well, apart from the context. Since the hero only has a character template, it is possible to make a kind of overlay of Blade’s experience and memories with the hero, from love to her loss and connection with the sword. All this can be realized, and it’s good to include sins here as an active reason for the development of the hero, because increasing the level of mastery of Sin means overcoming this sin. This means there will be many opportunities for a hero with such immersion. About the world: These are the times of Kakashi, we know a little, but I like your idea with Hyuuga, we’ll find out what will happen in the end. And in principle, more events like this will be just fine. Thank you for the wonderful read, looking forward to more!
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it is pretty good read it ....................................................................................................................................