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Shadow Slave: Warrior of Will
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In a desolate land where humanity teeters on the brink of extinction due to the mysterious Spell, darkness still resides in the hearts of many people.
The government, facing both internal and external threats, is unable to provide for the impoverished and suffering inhabitants of the slums.
Raian, the young leader of a gang in the slums, takes it upon himself to change and create a better future for the slums.
Inheriting the will of his savior, his path full of obstacles and difficulties he had unwavering will to see it through.
To add cherry on top, he was infected by the nightmare spell, forcing him to battle through the Dream realm to survive and accomplish his dream.
Facing all the challenge up against him he only said. "Nah, I will succeed." with absolute confidence.
/////Author side note/////
Takes place in the world of Shadow Slave. MC has no plot knowledge. He is not reincarnated in this miserable world, rather a man from the slums with a goal that will do everything to achieve that said goal.
MC won't interact with Sunny and others early at least few dozen chapters before that, I'm going To flush out his character way before that, since the novel is starting 1 year+ before Sunny's nightmare call.
He is going to the forgotten shore some time before Sunny arrives.
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This probably doesn't qualify as fanfiction. Maybe this is somebody else's cup of tea, but personally I don't like when an author spends more time vicariously talking trash about the original characters through the mouth of their cookie cutter Gary stu, than bothering to get their terminology and lore right. The main character here is just a deuche, a low effort, and poorly written one, but overall just a trashy personality. No nuance there. Then, when the mc contracts the nightmare spell, and enters his first nightmare the author keeps calling him a sleeper and saying he's in the dream realm. The guy enters and just automatically gets three free memories. Not, he had to kill so much as a baby squirrel, no, he just had them like taking the role of a foot soldier would just give him that. Forget that the ancient warriors of the dream realm, which the nightmares are based on the history of, didn't have memories... Followed by more pointless jabs at sunny and his first nightmare just to make this bland, boring warrior character that's just completely in love with himself. Just why? What was the point? Work on the character writing because what you've written doesn't qualify to be called it's own character, rather it's just a low effort puppet for the authors biases on the original work, which this piece reads like they barely skimmed it.
Bro ilk yorum olduğu için mutlu olmanı ve zorluklar karşısında devam etmen için bunu moral olarak yazıyorum.bazen vazgeçmek isticeksin ama unutma seni öldürmeyen şey güçlendirir bu yorum sana biraz saçma gelebilir zorluklar karşısında azimle durursan sonunda başarıyı görüceksin sadece kendine inan bu arada kapak fotoğrafı baya iyi umarım kahramanın böyle bir zırhı olur[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
very good novel even if its a fanfic its not too close and personal with the main novel characters, i' d rate it more but the updates are non consistent but i can tell hes trying very hard on this
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Shameless author review, i think i am doing a pretty good job, writing quality is below SS but who can beat that, i will do my best for stable updates, story is pretty solid in my mind, whether or not i can write that is uncertain and the world is absolutely gorgeus. but remember. Its only going to get better as i keep writing.