/ Anime & Comics / Second Journey (Highschool DXD Fanfic)
Tóm tắt
She died after protecting her twin brother from the last battle. She was glad to be free from her curse only to be awaken again in another family with another bigger curse. Will she ever free from the curse? Will she ever found love?
Crossover story of several other anime or comic. (I don't own any other character other than my own OCs)
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- Chất lượng dịch thuật
- Tính ổn định của các bản cập nhật
- Phát triển câu chuyện
- Thiết kế nhân vật
- Bối cảnh thế giới
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I'm giving an honest review here, this story isn't readable in it's current form. There's a grammar error almost every sentence that just makes this not worth the effort to read. Also you having an OC just follow along with the general dxd plot and change nothing is pretty much the absolute lowest form of fanfiction there is. It's like reading one of those aweful naruto fanfictions where someone will add a forth member to team 7. No one wants to read that...That's what you're doing here.
Loving the story so much some hick ups with gramer but this is a fan-fic get over it as long as you get the overall story this is great hope for more chapters and more background stories on the main character \(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥