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RWBY: GAMER PATH
4.13 (43 số lượng người đọc)
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You know the cliche someguy gets transmigrated and have to be the hero of their own stories right?
Welp one young boy was hand picked from Gaia to be sent into another world against his will with no consent to being tranfered away.
Unaware that Gaia was Remnant itself that sent Jack into the world of RWBY with the powers of a fragmented ability of [THE GAMER].
How will Jack the Gamer deal against Remnant troubles as its Destroyer, Servant, or Guardian.
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I’ll be honest, the story is well paced for a gamer-style fanfic, if you come over expecting the MC to be super OP in a couple of chapters this ain’t for you, and that is something I can appreciate. Alongside with the story being relatively well written as there are some mistakes here and there, but they don’t detract from the story itself. Now for the issues: The mc is an idiot through and through which in a normal situation would add some issues to the story in this case is to “show that he is human and bound to make mistakes” and don’t get me wrong that great but it’s a lazy way to show it even when the mc mentions it. And the other issue is the artificial conflict set on the later half of the initiation arc/JNPR arc. If the system can’t detect the intrusion of the Nightmare Grimm on the user, then what good is the system for? Or in any case why would you show us the intrusion and then call attention to it in very blantant manner when it would’ve been better not to mention it at all, use the character introduction of Shion AND then show the Grimm without compromising the system and the narrative.
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the writing is so bad that, you will notice many double the same exact word that make your brain confused. the story so far mc just train and its boring. character design MC is stupid. below avarage human IQ.
readers: there's a problem here (like the absurd amount of aura everyone has outside the MC) Author: suck m.. di..k me: take 1 star. no kidding, your fanfic has a horrible rating, it's no use writing 1 million chapters if you don't solve the basics
your novel is interesting but your writing still sucks. really really suck. it's like with all the novel you wrote you never improved.
Overall a good novel but the mc is to weak and the gamer system basically doesn’t exist as it is just a normal system
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I find this to be a good fic, sure the gamer here is on the weaker end, but throughout the story, you can just feel this upward climb of power and scale, making it feel earned, he doesn’t get instant dungeons or any form of them either, so grinding away doesn’t present itself until it’s earned, making the journey to becoming op feel more awesome, much like how in solo leveling you could see in the early chapters sung jin woo’s growth into the op being he became, our gamer here feels much the same way, except due to it being a fanfic it allows for more threats and rewards being pulled from other universes aside from its main established verse resulting in a good read that I for sure will recommend to anyone who enjoys power creep. All in all, good fic and hope it continues on until the end of time.
Well... i will give this a try since you have NEVER written something past 100 chapters before. And after doing.... 5? failed RWBY fanfics. Lets hope you succeed in this one. To bad you dont write Lemons/goodstuff/Segs
Aside from the crossovers, I like the plot of the story as it build a proper foundation at the beginning.
I will give a solid four stars just for support. I hope that the author will finish this story this time around and not just drop halfway like the other books. It's okay even if you rush it because it wasn't enjoyable to write anymore, just finish it!
It's great sadly because of the webnovel app we can't read it fully anymore I hope you switch to a new platform. See you when the webnovel is fix or move on a new site.
para mi la 2 es la megor opcion aunque podrias encontrar un megor opcion para tu pokemon inicial y tendrias que tener pruebas para que mohn te crea aunke si presisas inspiracion podrias leer lo naturarl de Isao-Yagami en wattpat aunke es tu historia y tu ases lo que quieres
Hey what are you going to use that power armor you found in mt. Glenn, are you going to make iron man armor or make a new design from it. Can’t wait to see what going to happen next and are his clones going to be left behind to protect his island and tech from both Altas and Salem
Hey when the MC take over the island can MC uses alternative energies to power the island like water, wind, sunlight, thermal, oil, atomic, etc and can he create gunpowder for ammonation or mix dust and gunpowder ammo to make it stronger
Hey if the MC wants to build a robot army in the future, get some ideas from Star Wars, terminator, marvel, transformers, and Godzilla for mecha Godzilla imaged the look in everyone’s face if MC created Mecha Godzilla to fight a kaiju sized Grimm
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the MC is too weak for him to be considered a gamer even a downgraded one when he kill a lvl15 monster he only gain 15 exp .