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Rise For The Heavenly Dao
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Rise For The Heavenly Dao is a cultivation story that surrounds around Josief Allen, who was sent back to the past and got a chance relive through his life and fix his big mistakes and save his close ones, read as you witness how he works up from bottom to be the strongest cultivator and reach up to the pinnacle of heavenly Dao.
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P.S The cover of RFTHD does not belong to me, i just found suitable for the image of the main character Josief. For that reason, i decide to use it. The credit fully belongs to the owner. If the owner of the cover wants me to take it down, DM on Discord (Yajo0213)
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This novel has some grammar and punctuation flaws, but overall is good. It just needs to fix two problems, get a stabel update release and it need of more time. This has the potential to become something good but if the Author dosent fix a consistent chapter update, he will lose out big.
flaws: grammar and punctuation strengths: pacing, dialogue and character writing so far, the story is good, and inciting. there may be a few grammar errors, but it won’t ruin your enjoyment while reading. all in all, i believe this novel holds potential
Probably much more enjoyable if you are into cultivation, I've never been able to get into it but still found some enjoyment in reading this, all it needs is some less grammar mistakes and it would be a solid 5 star.