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molovori

Not a fan of this one. Having read only 2 chapters, I knew it was bad. The author keeps mixing up He and She. With the bad grammar and the confusing POV change, it is barely readable. There is just too many mistakes and the Author doesn't fix them. I get that English is not Author's native language, but at least try and fix it. There are commenters telling you what to fix. Cool powers for a Marvel fan-fic, but it's ruined by Harem and the awful Character Design. Betty Ross (30-45 yrs old), Hulk's love interest, blushes instantly after seeing MC (a teenager) during a fight between Hulk and the Abomination where people should be panicking. This part alone shows me that the rest of the story will be full of cringe and Author's lust fantasies. (It ain't romance if it's more than one person, that shit is lust.) (I hate harem but I still gave this a try.) If you're into harem and low iq stories such as this then cool. You do you.

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MaN1rs

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John_Smith_3101

Did you copy this book because i saw it posted before a couple of months ago. .

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Lethal_Drinker

This story at first glance seemed like a good idea but then I saw Harem tag and just knew that this story will disappoint but still tried reading it and then by every paragraph my motivation to read it got lower and then the moment author wrote "Betty blushes" I dropped. this is for people who like dumb and low IQ novels

LV 14

nonamejestwitness

Finally I don't know why people don't use Danny phantoms powers, god I'm so happy right now that I didn't even read it yet, just didn't mess I up.

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Silly_Goose77

GOOD BUUTTTT COULD BE GREAT PLEASE USE GRAMMERLY IT WOULD IMPROVE THE STORY IMMENSELY BUT OTHER THAN THAT THIS IS THE BEST DANNY PHANTOM FF I HAVE READ...........

LV 15

sacredyeti

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH SO FAR KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! for those of you who have seen Danny phantom and like marvel this is the book for you and if the author is so kind he can join my writers community 😊 It is a gathering of writers and fans. dm me with ur response(the group is a discord community)

LV 14

Everything_Forever

This is really bad.

LV 4

Niceface

A escrita é horrível,o cara colocou xianxia na Marvel,teria sido mais legal se fosse simplesmente o Peter descobrindo e aprimorando seus poderes de fantasma,mas não o cara tem que colocar romance de cultivo e escrever como aqueles retardados chineses sobre orgulho e vomitar sangue

LV 13

salamander0

love it very much .

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Little_El

I just finished the rewritten version I was curious to see this raw version and my buddy the difference is clear, cliché cliché cliché! Needless to say, MC acting like a pervert, yeah the rewrite is really great. I'm so excited to see the big step you've taken 🥺 Congratulations

LV 5

Shady41

pretty good story. although it would be better if you used grammarly or something to fix your writing since it's really hard to read sometimes

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madman1010

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LV 10

Marcelinho_Ggazeli

please continue to write this work, very good, an MC who creates his own organization, recruits people and an author who creates new characters instead of simply copying existing ones in the universe, even if it is a fanfic this should not negate the creative creativity

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Z3RG102077

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KoRSito

🙄 Tia May......😉😉😉😉 Natasha.. Gwen👍😈... es una historia entretenida.. ya no el tipico hombre araña.. ahora es el Amigable Fantasma del vecindario👍😉.... diablos cuando lei que el MC encuentra a su tia May atractiva realmente espere que intentara conquistarla ((😅las historias de incesto hacen daño je je je))....

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Medalha

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Raldey

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FAP_Master_

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