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Shujinko_Josei

Did something happen to the Author? Why from 23 Chapters reduced to 1 Chapter? Are you trying to rewrite the fanfic? Good enough, I'll just have to drop this.

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Skaar
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I really don't get it, you give him all abilities and then he becomes a "beloved servant".[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]😔

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Endless85

As of now only 1 chapter is out so I'll be judging it off that alone... -Grammar and spelling is great so far didn't see any errors in that regard. -Story has a good pace to it not to fast but not painfully slow. -Updating stability: it's far too early to rate fairly. -In terms of characters and the decisions they make: the OC (Isaac) who transmigrates as Issei makes meh and good decisions, the only meh decision is that he's going to join Rias's peerage. While that would be a good decision early on since he gets allies early on, it's gonna suck when he gets the powers of Ashborne and he still has to listen to Rias's orders.

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Zerus
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whether you call a slave "beloved servant" or not a slave remains a slave regardless of treatment though. the mc is just dumb or likes to submit to others and be their slave, he has the potential to become by far the most powerful being in dxd just by training but he chooses to become a slave. but maybe he'll become a new breed of monarch "the stupid slave monarch" or something, anything else would be an insult to Ashborn. So if you like an Ultra Beta Mc then this is your book.

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Antonio_Hernandez_9851

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiccccceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee I like the fanfic, the long word is because I don’t want write a big paragrhap xD. 😅😅😅😅

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