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The proverb which says, "a word is enough for the wise.” is never a lie, I had so many opportunities, but I misuse them.

What a world I am, a world that I use my hands to destroy, I never thought I will regret it.

Who will think because of my attitude my parents abandoned me and never look back for me even for once.

I never thought desperation could be a disaster, not until when I began to see the other same of the mirror.

The world is a small place that is everything is vanity upon vanity, what you never thought to hurting is more hurtful than anything you could imagine, just like what goes around will surely come around someday sometimes.

Every one thinks I speak in parables, please come allow me to share you the story of my life or will I say my experience that I will never allow an enemy to encounter in life?

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  1. AbdulfatahFatima
    AbdulfatahFatima Đóng góp 19
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  3. Jinx_Lee
    Jinx_Lee Đóng góp 5

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Jinx_Lee

It was mentioned in the title "ex". I'm curious if it will be the husband. I'm looking forward to see if the begging scene where the woman became strong and make the man regrets everything. I also like your writing style. Keep up the good work!

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sicksix

Wow, your story totally rocked! It was my first time diving into this genre, and your first chapters had me hooked. I'm pretty sure other readers will be itching to explore further. Great job!

1yr
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TempestGee

I like where the plot is heading, keep it up👍

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EVIDBESCUS

I love how the Author is carrying me along in this great book ❤️ this book is must read for anyone looking forward to read a good story 💯

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Jena_Blackx

The flow of the story is really good. Am only a few chapters in but I already love this book😊. Kudos author.

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AuthoressChioma

Was hooked up with the book because of a well written synopsis.No much grammatical error and the way you introduced the character was nice keep it up 🌹❤️

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Amarachukwu_Okoli_2708

This is quite a nice work although its faults are pretty hard to miss. Like the wrong spellings, and the omission of punctuation marks. But once those are overlooked, one can't help but appreciate the plot and characters. Good job 👍

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isyon
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story really interesting, just some grammatical errors in the first chapter but beside that, it's really good

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AZPRETTY

This story really makes my heart ecstatic. Thanks for writing this novel, dear author!

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FranzDero

This very unique story not everyone cannot judge from its coverKeep up the good work

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SwagnosticDaoist

It's a bit early to say too much, but i do believe the story has massive potential. If the author changes certain small things, you would have a banger of a plot and an un-put-down-able book! Fight!

1yr
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Moawar

Yep, you got me hooked by chapter 3, and I can tell that this story has the potential to snowball into something great, shame that it's only 7 chapters, but I can wait patiently for more.

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DARK_DEKU

Well the book synopsis is great while the book is awesome 😎 please keep it up

1yr
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BaldyTheWriter

Great novel with great potential. Writing quality is great and story even better. Looking forwards to seeing how the story unfolds. Keep it up Author!

1yr
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Scarlet_Wolf96

Interesting story. Even though there are several grammars that need to be corrected, I can understand the flow of the story that was written.Keep practicing and also keep the flow of the story you wrote so it won't just disappear.Good luck, author.

1yr
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marvel_away

It is an interesting read. Would like to read more chapters since I'm interested in how it will develop from this point onwards. One thing note that it require more updates.

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Theothegiant

This book was an interesting read, the author's choice of words in the story is great and scenes are very descriptive! relationship dynamics and characters are at an all time high with this one!

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HeavensMistake2

I am not much of a romance or love related novel ready buh this novel is an attention drawer, it drew me in, I believe captivated me is the right word Well done author, and the grammar usage is very above average

1yr
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Joshua_Cruiz

I just started reading this book, and from what I am seeing it is really an interesting one, I would recommend to guys

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Ninestar619_5803

The story is great. A voice of regret and then recovering to be something that Mc can be proud of. It takes time to resolve everything just like it is said in this book. This plot has an interesting pace where every word is worth reading. The background is well explained, and the character is well designed it to easy to understand. The writing style is awesome making it easy to flow. GREAT WORK AUTHOR, KEEP IT UP!

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