Redeeming The Golden Ticket To Life

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Prince_nonchalant

Hmmmm.... Is it illegal to create a second review? Because if it is i'mma bout to head to court for it. My first review was only after 3 chapters and I didn't give it the full glory like it truly deserved. So I will leave a second review here (Full 5) to show the great improvement the story has gone through since its beginning. First off, I love the chracters. They are charismatic and extremely enjoyable to read. Especially Bai Chang and Hu (Hu low-key reminds me of myself) *Cough* I love when books use strong female characters because a lot of the time ppl portray them as weak and I believe women can do anything a man can if they put their mind to it. Secondly, the writing style is simply amazing. The flow of your words is like a neatly made fountain (Yes a little poetic here). The descriptions are really good when it comes on to the characters but I think the world background could use just a tad more detail to emphasize each setting. Otherwise story deserves the full 5 from me. Great job and great improvement from the first time. Hope you keep at it💯💯

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Nomed_Forcraziness

.................................................. TBH you're killing me. ..... how on earth did you write such a unique story... . damn. ... really appreciate it as a reader. . thank you for your hard work. . and also hoping for more in the future. .

LV 5

sagorika_adhikari

Hello Readers, I thought to put up the 50th review myself. Welcome to the story and I promise from my side, that the story gets better & better with each passing chapters. There is romance surrounded by the mystery of the past and future. Hop on the bandwagon of Sci-fi, hackers, coders & science geeks all encompassed in a fluffy romance and a behind the scene war; between Father & Son, on who gets to spend more time with our MC, Bai Chang.

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Vidit_Verma

Very well written book. Enjoyed reading this wonderful book so far , [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 4

KeCha

There are some key factors that i like and dislike about this book. 1) i like the transmigration from future to past. 2) i like how she’s already married with a kid. Plus the interaction from father to child. I guess that’s just the plot. 1) I don’t like how this story is written in first point of view. I guess that’s just preference. It’s a little weird for a story because there’s a clear distinction between reader and character. For example, if a scene was acted out with the protagonist laughing, we as the viewer literally see that. In a story format in first point of view, the reader will be reading “I laughed”. I find that very off putting because i didn’t laugh. I don’t know if you get what i mean. I think third point of view(he/she/(name)/they) will be a better option. 2) Grammar and coherence. Some sentences can be structured more fluently so it can flow better.

LV 2

Jozan

Wow! Bai Chang doesn't like to play around but why she so horny for the doctor in the first and second chapter.😭😭🤧 But that Big Buddha sounds like he's gonna be a *special* character to look forward to. Keep up the work Author-sama 👍

LV 10

TheIllusionist

This is a very interesting piece. I highly recommend this. It's not like the other cliché story and it something that would make you keep up from reading. Although, there are few things to improve like the Point of View of each characters, the Author's writing is improving on every chapter. Good job, sagorika-san! Keep you up the good work.

LV 10

MandyBuchner23

I was really sad that only 20 chapters are out but I know i should be patient. However, this book is sooo good! I love the Female lead she is awesome and im glad she’s opening up to her son and husband. I want them to be a happy family! Author please update soon🥺I’ll die from waiting😔Also thank you for releasing such master peice😌🤩🤍

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DaoistWQzCPZ

The book is nice and good I'm happy that I read it Ang making me relax every night after work thank you to the publisher of the books heheheheh

LV 5

TanusreeTanu

When would you start writing again?????????? 😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😥😥😥🙏🙏😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥

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Rena_Gindi

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LV 14

Queen_Dee1018

I'm giving it a 5*. The storyline is nice and characters are interesting. No long winding misunderstanding and drama. This is such a gem. FL isn't weak and ML isn't the typical domineering type to FL.They are just adorable. Good work on this author. ❤

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kyle_irish

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Emp_Ress_Aballe

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lazylyn

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LV 1

Cloverly

It is so great, the story has good sense and very entertaining... From what I can see, this has potential for those newbie...The great thing is, the author is very passionate and deeply focused upon the role and plot. I like it very much. Love love it Big sis @sagorika

LV 2

nishidurani

this book is a piece of gem, all the characters are well designed, and I instantly fell in love with the MC, she is so sharp and sly. the story is well placed and have clear details. each character is designed well and POVS are managed well which are not found in many books. good work author

LV 4

Ordenador

Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best! 💪💪

LV 2

Nomed_Forcraziness

.................................................. the story is great. . . I had fun reading it.. . it gets more interesting chapter after chapter. .. ththank you for your hard work. .