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Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
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A medical student died because of negligence of the authorities. Later, he is granted a second chance in life with some boons. But being an Otaku and Naruto fan, he chooses to live in the chaotic world of Naruto.
The story will follow canon for the initial part with a new plot. Major changes will reflect in the later part as our MC grows up. The story has strong AU elements and the power scaling is ramped up to explore various foreign elements in Naruto. Everything in its entirety will be a part of the Naruto series with details and speculations of my own.
This story is my original creation, and I post it on Scribble hub and Webnovel. You might find a few initial chapters on Royal Road.
Note:- The starting 40 chapters or so have poor grammar and various mistakes since I was a new writer back then and lacked experience. But I am working on editing them.
Warning:-I don't own Naruto or any related stuff except my MC and Original characters and jutsus. (Yep, there are lots and lots of original jutsus in the story.)
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Hmmm can't really write a review since I'm bad at describing things but I'll try. Well let's see, grammar, its ok, I don't have any problems with it. Update, well its stable so that's good. Story development, I don't know since I can't think of anything to say to this. Characters, they're not emotionless puppets so that's good. World background, the author I guess knows it so its good
Not for me, dropped chater 23, i don't understand the need to make the Mc so OP from the beginning , lit's like if he was litteraly screaming "I'M DIFFERENT, I'M SMART, I'M GENTLE" non stop with his action and the story developpement , while saying "I'm totally normal" to other character. Sad , the concept of Madara's grandson could have been nice if he wasn't so stupidly OP from the start
Story started out strong, ended up faltering as it went on. Introduced random factors to maintain some semblance of motivation for mc's growth, and characters remain stagnant (except for powers) throughout novel. Interesting read at first, but I'll be dropping it now.
everything started very well... I read 100 chapters but couldn't take any more. a lot of excess. The protagonist is strong but useless. it's very sad.
i don't know why people need to make Naruto into a wuxia. My best guess is that the author had no ideas. The story was nothing special. the starting powers were op. the idea were childish.
Your joke scene is out of place and it's annoying. In a battlefield, where you can die without you knowing, you have the guts to think about "tentacle play?", hent*i seriously? - Chapter 45. There's also many other annoying joke scene. It's so cringe. And please, explain in detail what is this light release and darkness release is about? At least, give an example about other light release being used by ninja. So far, only MC can use light release. In the first place, there's no such thing as light release, void release, chaos release, darkness release, etc. Are you talking about xianxia laws or what.
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I'm disappointed. The author doesn't seem to have a grasp of how to form a storyline well, and keeps mixing up details between the various time periods in the story. Good effort, but the story lacks draw. It seems to me like the new villains only exist to give a challenge to the OP MC, who is only OP 50% of the time. That being said, writing is tough and I do see talent in the author as a writer. The language is clear and the writing itself isn't bad at all. Improving your foreshadowing skills and solidifying your overall plot before writing anymore would be nice. It's also unnecessary to give the MC so many powers, when just a few of them are actually used. Study the manga a little more - and I'd suggest reading some of the fanfics on translatinotaku, to inspire you more. Thanks for the hard work!
Their are too many elements' introduced. The MC is not even able to use all the abilities and I don't like this type of plot. Its my opinion so don't get offended.
Damn u mess your own plot very badly author san at first you want to make him op and now you want to nerf him?? Though you messed up I gotta say it's been a fine ride reading your story please keep up the goodwork
sorry to burst your bubble bro it does exist but i still gave you a 4star review without even reading it because maybe you will take it as an inspiration and make a better one than the one below https://***.fanfiction.net/s/9172570/1/Legacy
I really wanted to like this story, it has a non psycho uchiha MC that tries to gain knowledge and skills to his best ability But once he started to collect the infinity stones for his gauntlet I started questioning it hard. Also why even bother giving the MC future knowledge, at best he uses it to notice characters. I am at the 9 tailes attack and he hasn't used it directly to change ANYTHING. Story has changed very slightly but it's stuff the MC did on accident or in passing But I dropped it when a forced time skip happened just so it could screw with the MC's plans and keep the plot mostly intack. Might as well just read the manga at this point. If you are gonna make a AU then don't force the story plot to happen
HE LITERALLY WROTE OUT HIS OWN CHARACTER. I guess he wanted us interested in the canon characters but i don't. Now, for over 100 chapters (and counting) he's literally killed the MC off. I could live with the random nerf, thought the ride was fun enough, but could not be more annoyed at just removing the title character for over 20% of the novel. Not to mention the amount of chapters without him. I want to be a little more understanding that I guess he's more into worldbuilding and the background characters but am too annoyed to seriously consider it.
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Great story. I loved reading it. Hey you can ignore it but can you make a killing intent based jutsu. I mean he has chakra equal to tailed beast. And please don't make him aquare renagun early. Make it like when Madara finds out about he hides and trains the MC.
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please never drop this naruto novel I really like it.Its a good novel but please don't add any world travel in this fanfiction because their is already to much world travel one.
i gotta ask you where did you come up with light, dark, chaos and void elements? as pointed out by others, naruto's world already has so many elements and aspects, why add these? it is just gonna make it all the more confusing and complex. your writing skills are great, its been a while since i have read without seeing grammatical errors every chapter. ig im just not much into too op mc stories, it kinda takes the fun out of it for me. but for those who like op mc, which i think were majority of your readers, i think you should have kept the mc op instead of nerfing him later, or maybe introduce stronger opponents or some roadblock in his progress to even it out a little. good luck
I keep getting spammed by bots advertising this story. I see that there are no other comments calling this out, so I can only assume the author is deleting them. If my review gets deleted ill just leave another, so on so on. Your behavior is predatory. It’s also illegal.
Hello! Author here. I am a new writer who is writing a original novel. I have read various and thought of writing a fan-fiction to improve my writing skills. NOW FOR THE FAN-FIC There will be no harem, sorry to disappoint harem lovers. Though there can be two wives depending on reader's demand. A poll will be conducted to decide that. I am writing a action novel with mix elements of fantasy and adventure. I have zero experience in writing romance and don't expect me to pull out cheesy romance out of nowhere, though I am currently reading some romance novels to learn, but that will not be the focus for this novel. As unnecessary romance and harem may f**k up the story and drastically reduce the quality of reading experiences. Thank you and stay tuned with me and also don't forget to check out my original Novel based on Indian Mythology with many legendary beings and powers.