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Rebirth in Against the Gods with The Ultimate System
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In a modern world, a devoted cultivator sacrificed himself to save his beloved. Fate granted him a second chance as a shinigami in the "Against the Gods" universe. Equipped with the Ultimate System, he became Yun Che, a pivotal character. He now seeks not only personal power but also a way back to his love, defying the rules of the universe itself. Join him as he pushes the limits of power, challenges gods, and reshapes his destiny to reunite with his beloved.
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Writing Quality:3/5 Barely passable. Stability of Updates:4/5 Good Enough. Story Development:1/5 Too much inconsistency that I can't even say anything about it just that read the comments on some chapters and you will see the amount of stupidity in this story goes. Character Design:1/5 Does this guy have a split personality? or just retarded? He will act like a kid to that slightly offended him the Xia but when it comes to Jasmine who tries to murder him he will just lick her shoes off like a retard, I mean just a few seconds ago she tried to murder him only for him to tell all about his secrets I mean who the f*ck does that.. World Background:2/5 meh.
Story was kinda interesting at the start, then Chapter 10 happened, the MC went full retard. Not only did he use Shikai form of his sword, he was also less than a second from using Bankai. All so he can intimidate his weak ass clan, he completely exposed himself as something not normal in this world by using a power outside of profound energy. I can possibly accept this kinda response from the original Xiao Che who was naive and knew nothing of the powers of the world. But this came from a modern day MC who knows the whole power dynamic of the current world he inhabits. Even with this, I soldiered on and kept reading...bad idea obviously. Chap 13: Robs his clan and runs off leaving his Grandpa and Little Aunt to fend for themselves....cause why not. Chap 19-20: His decides he should fuse his Spirit and Body cultivation, problem is his Body is lvl 1 and Spirit is lv 31. He says it would take weeks to get his Body up to the same level but who has time for that? So instead he nerfed himself back to lvl 1 Spirit. Chap 23: 6 Months has passed and the MC has been traing and killing monsters in the forest. He recovered only to lvl 19 with 6 M.O.N.T.H.S of training and killing.....😑 Chap 24: MC kills one monster that is lvl 29 and gains 4 levels....W.T.F 🤬, making him lv 23 now....this happened in one day. Chap 28-29: One month has passed, MC is lvl 32😑. He gets a quest to get the Fire Seed, the lvl req. of the quest is 60 because of the lvl 70+ Dragon guarding it. Instead of using his abilities to just speed run in and grab the seed and leave, he decides he needs to kill the dragon for the exp😑.....*sigh* Chap 30: MC uses his Bankai and disturbs the whole fucking world (He knows that this will happen). MC has now completely exposed himself to every major power in the world and some outside it. I completely stopped at this point, was just getting a bit too much for me. After going full retard in Chapter 10 he never seemed to recover...sad😭
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I shamelessly give you 5 stars because i love all fanfic novel ATG and not only that but i think your writing quality was good enough. I hope you don't rushed this novel...
I really like the mix of atg and bleach thanks for a good story and chapters hope you keep going. . .
Another atg trashfic, same as the atg nurarihyon no mago ,same stupid trashfic, it's ok if he time travel but combining novel and anime is faking dumb
😎 Thug LIFE I don't know what the author thinks, this story is very strange and excessive. MC seems weak with bleach system. What's more this is plagiarism and I hate that. I hope all readers report this content abuse. And I hope this novel will be deleted like some other fanfiction novels.😎 Thug LIFE
Sorry if i offended you but this story sucks, the character sucks and the way you wrote sucks. Honestly i think this is a wasted potential.
the worst MC ever. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
An interesting fan fic of ATG and Bleach. When I was reading the first 20 or so chapters there was many times I felt the urge to cringe but after those chapters I feel like the story has found its tone and rhythm which now has made it one of my favorite fan fics on Webnovel ☺ So if you can get past the initial hurdle in the first few chapters you will find a well written and enjoyable story 😝 Keep up the good work! 👍
first: I will say that the author of this work is a degenerate schoolboy. second: there is a constant mention of the Canon in the novel(I read up to Chapter 20). but the constant mention of the nirazu Canon was not correct (for example, Jasmine was found on the mountain behind the Xiao clan. for Jasmine there were no pursuers because she killed everyone, and the goddess received her own poison). third: why should all the characters be given the appearance of other people? the appearance of the characters has already been shown in pictures, and then in manhwa. four: too many Grand pianos. the behavior of the characters is not realistic, not canonical, and especially not like Chinese cultivators. the hero's actions are stupid and meaningless. the narrative jumps like a mountain goat with a mental disorder. as a result, this is not a fan fiction on a Chinese work. a mockery of a good novel by the hands of this author. still davlenie Japanese ****. only inserts from the original and the world itself are similar to the style of Chinese works, and so on and so forth. my rating is 2/10. did not put 1 only because of the original world of atg and ideas with the addition of bleach. the implementation of the idea is just terrible.
Read all of it so far and i have got to say, clap clap, in my opinion the bleach moves are just way too good that it almost makes any story good instantly. Bankai? in a cultivation world, i've never been so thrilled so it happen. The novel uses anime characters as a replacement for some of the characters which makes it really is to imagine if you have seen the anime character before. the writing quality is pretty good compared to others, there is some broken sentences but anyone with half a brain should be able to understand the message trying to be told. Updates are every now and then, though i just started reading this recently so i am only going based off the dates the chapters was released. The story development is very good in my opinion, a lot of potential. i mean this is ATG + System/Bleach + multiple universes??? there is too much potential in my opinion. the original ATG i liked the first 230 chapters a lot however it slowly became very painful to keep reading it, really hope too see these arcs done in more of a correct and bad ass way compared to the original. Thanks for the chapters! As a fellow writer, take your time, excited to see how things go.
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All was good so far at the start but the story contradiction and mc is well the best full of ****.....one of the most craps it ruining the world you writing the story base on and put other world in it to make it more of a ***** crap.....you writing style os good but you brain process for this is story is well not even considerable.....good luck for the future development so you make a good mc and world BASED story to not ruin the world story with crao developments.....
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Its nice and all with an op hero but you should make his goals clear or at least make it so that he will have his hard moments with an exciting fight once every few dozens of chapters because everybody knows human character is shaped through hardships and pain
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Sorry my sister, but since the Empress of the Moon event started, I feel that you have spoiled a lot of things. I hope for success in the future. I will stop reading this novel.
I think It was better before he entered the events of the Empress of the Moon and he saved her younger sister and thinks about hitting him. She prepared cheap comedy in anime.
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I thought it'd seem an interesting novel from the first chapter but it ended up as another cliche trash novel. Read up to chapter 20 and half of my brain cells are gone. For someone who seemed to be on the top of the world in his past life, he goes full on retard the moment he reincarnates.