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Rain World: The Knight
4.4 (13 số lượng người đọc)
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I stumbled upon this captivating game known as "Rain World," and an overwhelming desire to craft a fanfiction story about it immediately welled up within me.
As I delve into this creative endeavor, I'm utilizing ChatGPT to enhance and refine my writing. I would greatly appreciate your feedback on the result.
ps. this synopsis is even edited by ChaTGPT
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pretty good, don't gotta worry about chatgpt it's overall not a problem plus it's one of the few rainworld fics we'll made if I do say so myself
I have only read the first three chapters so take this review with a grain of salt. The writing quality has no instantly noticeable flaws but lacks details about the protagonists surroundings this is very important especially in an environment such as Rain World. I do find the description of our main character lacking, without a pool of water or a mirror the readers should at least be provided with a body shape and colors to help readers minds fill in the blanks that any written text may not have. I do know how slug cats look but with the verities of them suck was Gourmand and Saint The story itself (especially with the sudden pace change with the blue lizard) stays fluently Chaotic. with how the world of Rain world operates this is quite pleasant. This kind of writing perfectly follows the game itself. Constantly changes from eating little bugs one second to getting drowned by a red eyed pole, this is what I hope won't change too much during this story. Thx for reading. -Blipbug Lover
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I went in knowing nothing about the game and was interested enough to dive deep into the rabbit hole that is Rain World.What a crazy concept for a game. Not to mention the insane amount of information available in the communities. I ended up watching a two hour documentary about the games fauna and flora... I haven't even played it and I already know so much. Crazy.This novel is worth a try, the game it is based on is so huge and the author seems invested in writing about it. Excellent potential.
MORE I NEED MOREThis fic satiates and embolden my addiction to Rain world ongg🔥Author is cooking
so far so goodi was not so sure about the chat gpt but i cant even notice its theregood reading give it a chance
I'll just rate the author for being a connoisseur of good games ...................................................................................