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Princess and her knight(Overlord AU)
4.33 (24 số lượng người đọc)
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No Ainz, no Nazzarick, no Yggdrassil just some guy who got hit by a truck and was sent to the New world.
overlord AU
Mc X Renner
Slow harem build up, with very intense jealousy and drama ( Yandere Renner)
The mc has various skills from various anime but he doesn't know that so he has to figure it out.
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Please read.
10 chapters ahead on Patreon.
At Patreon . Com/YoungmasterDio
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Why is he trying so hard to gain a reputation when they already know he's a king? Why does he bow to the princess all the time when that's how he presented himself to them? It's stupid.
Form what I understand domain expension is basically reflecting your soul on the world using enrgy, and your mind is working as sort of perspective, so one soul can have many domain expension, just like every thing can look different depending on perspective, but still be the same thing, lets say your mind works as your own perspective and representation of your internal domain aka soul (in some interpretation soul i world itself as fragment of reality, or holds one, becouse soul realm) so you can reflect your soul on world basing on your will and understanding of your soul, i mean, you can have different looks of one thing, but you can imagine whole thing, and even its internal part, and understand its every function. Now lets say that your soul is making you yourself, a soul strong enought can generate enrgy and sustain mind on its own without need of material ir ny ither type of body or any kind of energy as sustainment, anchor, or whatever. then everything that is part of you have its influence and relfection on your soul, at least as form of information, memory image reflected on your soul, if not formation and shape of or in soul (look reincarnated as a slime, where skills are basically advenced patterns in soul, generally permament magic circles but in more advenced forms and made of soul) then every part of you is part of the image of your soul, and then EVERY PART OF YOU CAN BE REFLECTED ON WORLD AROUND YOU USING YOUR ENERGY or directly on your enrgy, and become a part of your domain, So he can make it that as long as he have understanding of any of his skills or attributes, and enought will and focus to maintain a clear image of it, he can extend a domain with its characteristic as long as he have enought enrgy, Domain with sukuna cutting abilities, domain with elements like sukuna fire basing on their understanding, domain with constant supression like demon lord haki, domain that overwhelm and overfolw with enrgy like his body and genrates enregy like dragon core, regeneration and defense domain becouse of avalon basically being merged with or atrsched to or residing inside his soul, maybe some dimensional barriers and healing in every doamin as passive effect of every domain becouse of any mechanic you will think of, for exaple throwing more enrgy in avalon would extend its powers, it makes sense as it haves dimensional ability to be able to work on distance, especially if he will have barrier domain, and even if not it would be logical to extend avalon powers to barrier to some extent making it more stable, and maybe impossible to be damaged from one or two sides or even making his domain a space cut off from reality. Even overwritting actual reality space with avalon space would make sense, its your fanfic man, go wild, you have free hand, i am proud to be here to throw ideas at you and see if they help you, It is rare to see as good wor as yours at such early stage, where one can actually help, becouse there are no like 100 useless comments 30 limited after chapter pops up so author have no motivation to read them.
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Absolutely marvelous fanfic, it's been age for me searching for Renner as the main FML fanfic. The story in itself is also very entertaining and the only downside of this fanfic is the lack of chapters. We need moaaaarrrr
Nice introduction but update is slow which is why most weeb find it difficult to wait so they move on without save it to their library. so overall try to update more often.
not much chapters for a proper review but the concept looks amazing hope author doesn't drop
As a story it has plenty of lore and flow, it may jump a bit weirdly and come off a bit sluggish. But my main issue is the grammar and choice of words making it feel what could be an amazing story clunky. The main character does seem to brown nose a bit to much, but otherwise a refreshing dynamic.
it's a different take on overlord story , great character interaction & story development if like Renner or Lakyus or Kingdom in general it's a good Read , 💯
The story has good plot progression , pacing, and writing. My one complaint is the grammer issues though most times you can easily fill those grammatical holes when you read.
Awesome story. I’m trying to check it out on Patreon but I can’t find YoungmasterDio tho
Overall it's a good story, but the beginning is a bit problematic, the story didn't seem to flow well in the first chapters and some strange things, like allowing a foreign knight to guard a princess, but other than that it's a good, competent story.
this is the first in a long time that i've read a work with an actual working brain of an author in this app. although there are some inconsistencies, it's hardly a big deal and can be rationalized with some little thinking. good job author-san.
Tolong jangan membuat MC membosankan [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Trop long des info inutiles dans tout les chapitres et trop de dialogue inutiles 30 chapitre si on enlevé les truc inutiles il y a en 15 Bref du remplissage [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I haven't seen many fics like this, and it's different than most that I've seen.
What le MC esquive un sujet qu'il amène lui même sur la table [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
call me biased but i love yandere so cinq étoiles from me