/ Eastern / Primordial Star Scripture
Tóm tắt
The Barren Continent, where martial arts are supreme, and strength is honored above all.
The once-in-an-era prodigy, Ye Chen, came forth with the ancient and unparalleled divine technique. He cultivated his martial veins, survived the thunder tribulation, merged with the spirit blood of true beings, and shook the six harmonies and the eight desolations with his martial prowess. He roamed the myriad realms and heavens, fighting across the world with the secret realm of billions of stars that were eternal and undying!
An endless trove of treasures, worlds of bizarre wonders, sects, ancient clans, fairies, witches, friendships and enmities, and heated battles—all of it was contained therein.
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Viết đánh giá
your usual got bullied then became a genius and start slapping face novel
So far the book is flowing well. Hopefully the author will continue with this pace without killing the story.
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Good Story in theory. Especially like his quick acceptance & embrace of the new world. None of this "How do i get back to earth" garbage. But holy hell... 1. Too much repetition of text -> Whole paragraphs either paraphrased or copy pasted. 2. Too many flowery exchanges. Like I get Respect etc. but that's just rather excessively applied in this story. 3. The MC... The Dungeon Guardian explains how it works. Then at every!!! Trial he asks himself if the voice is the Master of the Dungeon. Like that's not good storytelling, that's just stretching the word count to infinity. 4. The amount of "Could it be..." etc is baffeling as well 5. Sees the FL in person. Asks himself where he heard the name before.. Like Seriously ?? Btw Answer would be less then a month ago. Story has potential but the way of writing is just so bad.