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Potion Maker
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This is a story about a young man named Will! While playing his favorite game "Potion Maker" after installing a mod, his computer shorted out.
Will then woke up in a new world with the ability to make any potion he wishes!
With a system that allows him to gain new abilities, will he be walked on by those stronger? Or will he rise to the top?
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I personally enjoy this novel and I would recommend it however it is my opinion so it’s up to you to decide if you enjoy it or not.
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Currently reading the story and the feeling it gives is SLOW PACED!! At chapter 20 and the story has a very slow progress! I'm already skimming it.
Hello! I am the author of this novel! Here are some things to take note of! The release rate tends to be around 4-5 a week, sometimes it's just three a week if I have real life things or hit a mental block. The beginning chapters have their issues, this is true. The more edited version is on amazon, link is in the novel description (volume 1) I think there is an issue with the title on the ebook, it's off center XD Anyways! A link to my discord is in the novel description, go there so I can give notices on delays or other plans! Potion Maker was initially made on the spur of the moment, it wasn't until Chapter 20ish when I started to plan events on paper before I typed, so be understandable when you run into confusion, the later chapters just get better. I hope you enjoy reading the novel!
This review is partly because of me personally not liking his "enemy" surviving airborne poison with the excuse that he was under a pile of bodies, which wouldn't be possible because he would die along with everybody else unless they all piled of top of the boy when the poison was released. Plus setting up a main rival cheapens the plot a bit and finally this novel is about potions and yet after having the ingredients to make a potion that would make him more powerful it's takes 12 chapters for it to happen. Also the powerful girl trapped/sleeping/hurt is way too overused.
Oh gosh darn it! I thought it was about the game. Well, I guess I should've read the description my bad. Btw good novel. Some regrets.Some regrets.Some regrets.