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Pokemon Rebirth: Rise of Punit[Not Continued]
2.82 (17 số lượng người đọc)
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I jolted awake, my heart hammering like I’d just outrun a Gyarados.
The wooden beams above me were etched with carvings of Pokémon, details so crisp it felt wrong, unfamiliar.
Panic clawed its way up my throat as my hands gripped a soft, clean bedspread—completely different from the scratchy, cheap sheets I remembered.
Where was I?
The room was filled with signs of a life that wasn’t mine—Charmander, Squirtle, and Bulbasaur posters lining the walls, shelves cluttered with memorabilia.
A photo on the dresser stopped me cold—a boy and his parents, all smiles.
But the faces...they tugged at something deep inside me, a connection I couldn’t place.
When I stumbled to the mirror, it hit me like a freight train.
The boy staring back wasn’t me—not the me I remembered.
The reflection was younger, smaller, but the sharp intelligence in those midnight-black eyes? That was still mine.
I wasn’t just waking up in some random room.
I had become someone else, someone living in the Pokémon world.
And with the powers I felt coursing through me—unlimited money, instant move learning, rapid evolution—this wasn’t just a new life.
It was a chance to rewrite everything.
A world to conquer, trainers to defeat.
Ash, Gary, Blaze—they didn’t know what was coming.
This world was mine now.
And no one—no one—was going to stop me.
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Usually I’m down for an edgy MC however he’s too in his head granted I have only read to chapter 6. But it’s like every other paragraph is him going on and on about how he is scared of everything and it is harder to survive in the world due to it being real life. But after he does that for every single thing he does it is legitimately aggravating when you are genuinely interested in seeing how he will eventually develop not constantly going on and on and not doing anything about it. Especially when it’s alluding that he was an adult, so he needs to grow up. He may have changed later in the story and I do not intend to put down the work itself because I am sure it is a solid piece with great potential, it unfortunately for me did not get to that point soon enough.
Seems like a fanfic written by Chat GPT. I have read alot of fanfics written in this style, where there is very little dailougue, and they just describe everything instead. Overall, not impressed![img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
It started well, it has a lot of potential if the inserted female OC that ruined the story is removed, in a somewhat brutal way, the story is passable at best, I leave this review if there is someone who likes to read reviews before reading a story so as not to have to waste their time if the story is bad, the story itself is good, except for the forced romance and illogical and forced manipulation of sentimentality that the protagonist should not have, everything is very good, giving it 3 stars is because it has potential or well, it had.
I'm not an expert in writing but it's simply noticeable when someone uses an AI. When you read it, you feel something is wrong, you don't know what it is but something is obviously wrong.
the moment he interacted with misty i quit reading. it ruined it. too much nonsense. wasted chapters. so disappointing. bye bye bye ... sigh ...
Brother if you can. please check out after getting your Ai done with it's correction. If you yourself read again you can change some stuff that Ai couldn't change. Although Ai can write many chapters there was no creativity in them it will copy from some sources. If this story is your writing then please check it out yourself before releaseing
**Author's Note:** Punit's Pokémon operate under a unique system that assigns milestone points based on their battle victories. These points aren't a form of currency, but rather key indicators of which he use for significant changes to occur—like a Pokémon evolving or learning a new move. For instance, to evolve his Bulbasaur into Ivysaur, Punit needs Bulbasaur to reach 16 points. At present, Bulbasaur has 4 points, and it would need 12 points to instantly teach Razor Leaf by punit. Each Pokémon has different milestones; for example, Pidgey already has 5 points. Points are earned when a Pokémon defeats another, whether it’s wild or owned by a trainer, but it cannot be one of Punit’s own Pokémon.
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Highly recommended to those seeing this review. Today's Pokemon fics in the name of originality don't make a straightforward reincarnation Pokemon adventures but after so long it is finally here on webnovel. Please show this fic some support guys.
Well, normally I like a Pokemon story, but why put the MC on a Pokemon journey with unlimited powers? Doesn't that take away from the character development? Besides, many things are difficult to understand at first.
getting on my nerves this writing after 7 chapter I quit I ckecked later for 10-20 no not getting into it
Looks like it has been written by an AI with author not even paying attention to the story and character build even after giving MC powerful boosts he's behaving like a child suspicious of everything.
Too dramatic, feels like written by AI. Anyways, try to rely less on AI or make it less dramatic/tense
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Christ on a Crucifix, this is cringe.. MC is acting like a 90's emo teen. chapter titles are cringe. no system Stat panel seems redundant. I rather watch Sasuke Uchiha brood over his vendetta than read this....
Hey readers, I am an author writing here. if you are gonna read this fanfiction, I want to clear something first so it will not waste your time: 1. I write a chapter myself first then use chatgpt to enhance it[ according to me, maybe you do not agree] then i edit what I think should edit then upload here. 2. I am not good with English and I am very lazy, so that is why I am using chatgpt for help. 3. I am writing for fun and I don't want to hire a human editor. 4.There would be 3 to 5 chapters daily, maybe some time 10 to 15 depending on my excitement to write but 3 to 5 chapters is sure. 5. Each chapter is between 900 to 1000 words maybe some 1300 to 1400 or maybe some 700 to 800 but my focus would be on at 900 to 1000 words. 6. If you like it please read, if you don't then you know what to do, as if you read please give suggestions so i can make things more interesting or at least try. 7.You can leave your suggestion anywhere in the novel, chapter comment, review, paragraph comment, I will read and if it fits the story I will apply and I will surely thank you. 8. Now comes the protagonist, some people say it is edgy, as I did not know much about it , but I am writing according to what if I live in Pokemon world, first take some time to get used to it, then slowly slowly show confidence and stay relaxed most of time and enjoy the life, in the beginning chapter it's might make you not to read but I understand everyone have their own preferences. 9. Now come romantic interest as whoever read until that chapter where first female lead come, i get it i make her annoying (maybe too much annoying) but as you see this is first novel I write myself, so I don't know how to show her personality right but after that i know some things so i try not make same problem with other female leads. 10. There is going to be only one romantic relationship in each region but in the end when punit become Pokemon master he going to marry only one girl. that's it , if something i want to tell you I will leave another review, thanks for reading this review, this review might be big but maybe it can save you time later.
Ok, I am sure this is written mostly by AI. Author not understanding English comments also reinforce this. Poor guy doesn’t even know that AI took over his writing when he only asked it to edit.