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[Multiple female leads. Proceed with caution if you prefer single or no romance.]
Fifteen years ago, Lin Yu unexpectedly reincarnated into a world fused with Pokémon.
He activated the Entry System.
Starting with an abandoned Charmander?
No problem, just enhance it with entries!
[Purification]: Removes any negative effects!
[King of Slackers]: Grow stronger just by staying idle!
[Thirty Years East, Thirty Years West]: Gain a 10% power boost when encountering a rival for the second time.
[Judgment]: Removes opponent's buffs.
And then there’s:
[Thornmail]
[Rasengan]
[Ultimate Thunder Chidori]
[Silence]
With these entries, extraordinary Pokémon began to appear before the public:
A Charizard with maxed-out stats in all six categories.
A Gardevoir raised through a nurturing system.
A ninja-themed Greninja bonded by ties of loyalty.
A Lucario wielding the Kaioken.
A Latias specializing in silence tactics.
A Tyranitar with maxed-out defensive stats...
[Multiple female leads included.]
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Un romance con un OC este fanfic es basura entonces, tantos personajes femeninos en Pokémon y mandan un OC asco me dan estos fanfic es como los que usan OC en fairy Tail como si no hubiera demasiados personajes femeninos para elegir
Hm hm it's worth the time I spend reading it and it's quite op just don't change the name too often and it is one of the best pokemon fan fic
Antes del capítulo 29 fue perfecto, me gustó mucho, pero luego de este capítulo hubo cosas que me incomodaron, el cambio a último momento no me agradó, recién me estaba acostumbrado a las características de este mundo y el que hagan cambios de forma muy repentina me confunde, algunas cosas se dejaron de lado sin explicación y la traducción de las nuevas clasificaciones de Pokémon no estuvo bien hecha, se usa la palabra maestro dos veces, la palabra Overlord me pareció más apropiado para otro tipo de historia y el título Rey Celestial no me gusta, me hace pensar cosas extrañas como: ¿Estos Pokémon gobiernan algo?¿Pueden volar?¿Controlan el cielo? xD jaja
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The novel is garbage, or rather, the translation is garbage, because you change the name of the protagonist and the female OC but not the others, are you subnormal or what? Wang Yao, Mrs. Qin, the Gym leader who appears in the first chapters, whose name I don't remember, it's absurd that you don't change them too, it breaks all the immersion.
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Writing Quality 1/5 : Lot of translation errors World Background 1/5 : It's confusing as hell Remaining 5/5 Not bad but can be a lot better.
The translation is off in what seems like every other paragraph, and the fact that it’s in china takes away from the mystical world of Pokémon, also there’s a few things that clearly lead to something that important but have no explanation about where they came from. Besides these things the story has a very cool idea and is interesting
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Very fun read with consistent updates and good writing quality and characterization for each of his caught Pokemon. world building is good as well, although its not set in the pokemon world, it still feels like it; with secret realms which is essentially danger rated pokemon wild zones, and plenty of battles and tournaments plus it still has gym battles so its essentially the same thing if you ask me.
bemplor uala conxentaçio em g/ de uma soluçio de 70 g de cdoreto de sódio dsolidosem 350ml de soluço? bemplor uala conxentaçio em g/ de uma soluçio de 70 g de cdoreto de sódio dsolidosem 350ml de soluço?
can you just not mix the real world with Pokemon especially china. and the move please use the correct one🙄. hard to find a good Pokemon novel and it's ez ruin it