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Crossing into the world of Naruto, and acquiring the One Piece system, with all the powers of the world of One Piece, swordsmanship, devil fruit, domineering.
-Do you think that your fire is very powerful? I have the burning fruit.
-Do you think that your thunder is very powerful? I have a thundering fruit.
-Do you think that your otter is very powerful? I have the frozen fruit.
-Did you said you want to die? Don’t worry, I also have a nickname: Death Doctor.
This isnt my fanfic!!!
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Ah yes... Lets be shameless... ...............................................................................................................................................
the character development is trash.. At First the mc is ok, but when he acquire the system he became so arrogant... faster than Flash... and you don't even know if he or she
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To whoever complaining about the grammar, know that this is one of the best translations out there, mostly everything i attempted to read excluding this is mtl
hi if your struggling with writing the book in English then you should use online tools like Grammarly for spelling corrections and basic grammar corrections
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it would have been clear by just looking at the cover of this fic but for those who don't understand this fic is cliched, looks machine translated. But still try it and be your own judge, I have read most of the fics so I am going to read it till I can handle or this becomes good, anyways happy reading[img=recommend]