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Pirate Achievement System

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Tóm tắt

“Ron” found himself inexplicably in the world of One Piece, after he was hit by a speeding truck. Facing a life-threatening situation, our hero was rescued by the fourteen-year-old Nami. After discovering his capability of evoking an achievement system, Ron’s adventure in one of his favorite fantasy worlds has started.

Achievement: Small Fortune (Get 10 million berries)

Achievement: Self-Discipline (1000 hours of practice time)

Achievement: Berserker Mode (10,000 hours of practice time)

……

Nami said with dull eyes: “what did you say…fifth-level magic?”

“Yes! it’s called The Last Judgment.”

1-15 taken from
https://translatinotaku.net

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Dollar

Ok now: The story is good, but the problem is, Dont fcking copy the translation of other people! First 13 chapters are all from translatinotaku... At chapter 14 you will see the horrible translation... Because its MAchine Translation! And when translation otaku post chapter 14, he will copy it again... Its ok if you translate it yourself, but no you habe to steal the work of others... Report pls!

4yr
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Otaku_Slayer

I am Otaku_Slayer the translator of the Novel: Pirate's Achievements System, on "https://*****translatinotaku.net/". I must say I'm really disappointed with such conduct...It saddens me to find out that the chapters that I've spent hours on are being used for someone else's personal gain...without even mentioning the original source... It is an interesting novel that I myself enjoy reading. And am trying my best to share that with my precious readers. Hopefully the website will take strict measures against such behavior. As for the people who have an interest in the novel, please stay tuned for more chapters to come on "https://*****translatinotaku.net/" or join my Patreon ‘Otaku_Slayer’ for more published chapters. Thank you for your Support! Peaceee!

4yr
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BeiWolf
LV 14 Badge

Using other people’s work without giving credit and not going over said work for mistakes is a sign of a lazy idiot Don’t be a lazy idiot To bad So sad

4yr
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Lord_Hallow

MC is about as sturdy as a piece of paper. This novel is going to need a heavy dose of plot armor for this MC to survive until the grand line. I appreciate the use of trying to integrate magic into the One Piece world, but it shouldn’t be at the expense of the things that matter in one piece like physical strength, stamina, and speed. First and foremost, if he wants to be successful in One Piece, he needs personal physical strength. Without the cheat ability of logia intangibility, he stands no chance. Right now he is essentially a frail excuse for a paramecia user. This isn’t the gamer where Jihan can just dump all his points into intellect and wisdom. The MC doesn’t have magic skills to buff his physical attributes. He’s a weak body with a strong soul. Yeah Magic’s fun and great, but unless the magic has Harry Potter type versatility, it’s not feasible to survive in One Piece World. I really do like your writing style and the dialogues aren’t bad. Other than the grammar sometimes, you haven nothing to worry about in that regard. But you need to do something about his training and mental faculties for even thinking that keeping his body that frail is a good idea. As of right now, chopper could destroy him without any of his power ups.

4yr
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Spee_Sage

copypaste? write the source and translate it yourself correctly .. copypaste? write the source and translate it yourself correctly .. copypaste? write the source and translate it yourself correctly ..

4yr
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glo_antttt

at this point it's no doubt in my mind this story is going to go to ****! interesting concept but a twisted minded author this story's already dead before it started! maybe the harem lords will be interested but they can only fap to this weirdo **** for so long 🤷🏼‍♀️

4yr
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Hentai_Senchou

Stolen from translatinotaku and all of the chapters after the latest chapter on translatinotaku are the worst machine translation I've ever seen

4yr
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F1nal
LV 6 Badge

For anyone interested the raw is you can find the raw on https://***.uukanshu.com/b/96307/ (海贼之成就系统作者) Its written by the same guy who wrote the fanfic about a dude who got the tremor-tremor fruit from one piece while being in the naruto world and the fanfic about a dude in one piece who received a zanpakto system-ish cheat.

4yr
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fadhilla

It's really bad story with east China Sea the OC name is wrong doesn't really show anything at all its just a cheap copy I don't think author like this should be allowed to post anything they want to

4yr
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Siegehart

Horrendous reading, spoils the reader's mood with inconsistent translation/language. Please improve as the language usage is inconsistent and horrible when there multiple language in the book

4yr
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DreamCrusher101

Its good slow pace but common its to slow 1 chapter one activity how long and how many chapters will it take to reach the start of the canon

4yr
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Gungnier

The story is great but its a stolen translation in the early chapters and an awful machine translation in the later ones. Just go to the original translator site and read it there for better experience.

4yr
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AverageWannaBe

Really nibba... Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho Y tho

4yr
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CrazyNousagi

Don't steal other people's hard work, scum!!! If I wanted to read it further than on translatingotaku I would've gone reading mtl or just subscribed on his patreon

4yr
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Ghalad

Really now??? Subscribing to patreon then stealing that guys work for real wtf bro be real and stop doing those things .that guy does all the hard and it gets stolen not cool

4yr
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Daoist260082

Not the real writer Stealing another writer work Not the real writer Stealing another writer work Not the real writer Stealing another writer work Not the real writer Stealing another writer work Not the real writer Stealing another writer work Not the real writer Stealing another writer work Not the real writer Stealing another writer work Not the real writer Stealing another writer work Not the real writer Stealing another writer work

4yr
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Better_Name

This wasnt necessarily good or bad until the 18th chapter where I just lost my patience for this novel, just Idk, read it if you want too, but I’m leaving this here

4yr
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Shiryue
LV 14 Badge

Copy paste but not 100%, not consistent with the name. Copy paste but not 100%, not consistent with the name. Copy paste but not 100%, not consistent with the name. Copy paste but not 100%, not consistent with the name.

4yr
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Straken

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4yr
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Monalishingun

F*ck you, you're no different from those people who upload FanFiction.net fanfictions in Wattpad and doesn't credit the true owner. Piece of sh*t. Don't ask why it's a 1 ☆, just read the story and the others' reviews and comments.

4yr
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