Pillar man in Demon Slayer

LV 4

WalterHeisenberg

Story has potential but the execution is not done well. Mc’s intelligence is MID for a pillar men. Story is MID. Author is MID. Characters bland like cardboards and just focus on Mc and some on his mother. Pacing is not that good. Mc barely uses his past intelligence and so far only taught his mother COOKING ideas/techniques/idr, he hasn’t thought of maybe changing the peoples ways to benefit him and just says ‘since they already sacrificed people, it’s ok for them to be vampires’. Mc had them move north but didn’t SPECIFY WHERE and just said ‘ where United States and Canada would be in the future.’ And say stuff like he could probably use them for business reasons. Author needs to fix the plot-holes. Ex: the part where he just SWAM THROUGH the Atlantic and came to Europe, skipped all the things he could’ve done in Europe and solely focused on trying to find if the stone being in Asia is true and rushing there. World background is hmmm ok. Writing quality is good. Updates are good. There hasn’t been much to criticize as there are limited chapters for now. I would recommend to edit the chaps or just do a do over.

LV 14

stinkclaw

yes I can hear the pilar man sound track now. x5dxtdcdycydcydcydcydcyddycycdfcycydcdyydycdcdydcydcyctddctrg6cr6cfyfycfcydctdcdyy fv6ff6vyvfyvf

LV 5

BAD_MAN

I give you 5 stars because it's JOJO AYAYAYAYAYAYAYYA....................................................................................

LV 7

Blue_Torch

Cannibal MC l

LV 2

OOFMARTIALARTIST

I swear to god, all these fanfic mcs are abnormal as can be. Like who tf takes some random and probably innocent people and kills them? This hit me the wrong way, just like experiencing second hand embarressement for a mc. Do people actually like their mcs to be psychotic murders? I mean, at the very least try to make a reason to justify the mc killing random people.

LV 1

DaoisttG8It7

So far, the story is going well, but will there be romance?😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌

LV 4

RuberX

Ii hate it because of how he act and how some thing are like force .......,...................................,................,..........

LV 4

Masof

Nice, story I really enjoy it, especially about the small details and history in that period. The grammar is good, I don't really see any major grammatical issues. Keep it up, hope you continue posting some more chapters.

LV 3

manyaktavuk

dont drop pls or i will be sad .....jdjsjsjsjjsjsjsjsjejjejshshejsjjsjsjsjsjsjjsjsjsjejjekekekekekekkekejejejrkkejdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjsjekkekeieieieiekekkekekskskskkkskskekekkekekekekekkekekekekekkeke NIGERUNDAYOOOOO

LV 2

Incognito3200

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LV 4

20thCenturyPharaoh

if you came here looking for an MC who acts , looks ,thinks like pillar man, then this fanfic is not for you. The MC is an edgy femboy with some serious issues . to put it simple, he's like every edgy teenager Wetdream

LV 14

Upcoming_Region

I like the books idea overall, so please continue to update instead of just leaving it behind because it's a great book.

LV 1

Kirigaia_Kazuna

Didn't you die somehow?☠☠☠ Didn't you die somehow?☠☠☠ Didn't you die somehow?☠☠☠ Didn't you die somehow?☠☠☠ Didn't you die somehow?☠☠☠ Didn't you die somehow?☠☠☠

LV 4

The_great_father

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LV 4

Amiel_Jashen

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say

LV 1

Desah07

The story is good, but i think the MC need a friend, i think the story would go better, but other than that i thought it was very good. and jojo is the best anime

LV 2

Incognito3200

When u Incrase your skill I'd be cool made an pillar man fan fic in Dragon ball Z, Naruto marvel etc idk [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 4

Amiel_Jashen

it's Good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 3

ReMormius

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LV 1

YASSINE_JRAIFI

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