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Alright, so I could tell you some fancy synopsis, but you came here for Pokémon, so it's not like you don't know what is up. Instead, I am going to tell you a bit about the mechanics of my story.
First! If you are looking for a journey that includes catching Pokémon and battles, you have come to the right place! But! The Pokémon will all get human like forms after they are caught, and will not be battling very much. They will be doing other things with Landon, the trainer, but I am sure you can rub a couple cents together to figure out what that means!
Second! Humans will be caught, but mostly Waifu material. While some guys will be caught, there will be no gay stuff with them and the MC. The girls that he catches will be doubling as his Pokémon because of special skins they get for there poke balls. I could go into that more, but read the damn book!
Lastly, there is a lot of sex in this book, but there is a storyline, so there will be times where the smut is spread out, or where it happens back to back. Also, the beginning is a bit rough, and I have to go back and fix some, but everything is straightened out later on. Sorry about that!
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Really interesting concept that actually got me hooked into it for the plot that it made me forgot what i came here (wink~wink~). I am really enjoying the story and hope that you continue to write. I will keep chucking powerstones from time to time, lets move forward together and free ultramex and catching them all (wink~wink~) <3
This book is definitely a unique spin on the Pokémon fanfic genre. It takes what you know and flips it like a pancake, more or less! The cast is diverse from familiar faces to new faces, each with their own characteristics and bodies…(wink wink) The book contains several references to the games, which is always a plus in my book. Can’t wait to see what Landon’s final team will look like!
It is very good with a few caveats the mc is a little slow in the head at times. like let's say trying to escape an evil organization only to run to a lawless place with two more evil organizations when he could just open a portal to a different dimension or timeline (I'm still a little confused on this part.) also, lemons happen very quickly with his captures which I don't mind at all personally but I could see where many will feel like it's too fast. It's still in its infancy but I feel like around human women the mc is too submissive even after being in a coma for ten years. and having his mind crammed with information by an AI he acts similarly to a little boy with his mom or aunt figures being shy, blushing, and running away instead of taking a stand. and even at this first moment of defiance or self-respect he immediately throws it away and acts like a little pleaser. I really hope mc becomes more emotionally developed over the course of the story maybe a mature motherly woman can help straighten him and his eq defianceis out because that's really the only thing I dislike about this story so far is the mc's current disposition towards submissiveness. But all in all I really like this story and I hope we continue to get more and more chapters.
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The year is 2023, i have finally found a r18 pokefic in webnovel. Seriously, you can't go wrong with pokemon, this franchise has waaay too many high quality waifus, it's like an all-you-can-eat buffet. It always surprised me the fact that there are tons of anime fanfics out there but barely any from pokemon.