Overlord: To Be Infinite [FanFic]

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G404

this is HAREM btw....................................................................................................................................

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FantasyTroll

This is incredibly good, and I give 5 stars for everything. An insane amount of detail was put into this, and the writing quality is absolutely top tier. I unfortunately dropped it because I'm not into slow paced novels like this. Though it is no doubt incredibly well made, and has survived to 40 chapters.

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iwannadie

honestly, i havent read it all, but the 4 chapters i have read till now were absolutely BEAUTIFUL. i love the way you describe everything and the small little changes you do to the characters. i just love it and hope you dont lose motivation for it. hope you continue this brilliant fanfic and dont stop it midway

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BoombaTheSaint

Author’s Review Writing Quality: Forever improving. My style is more or less metaphoric, with a slight hint of emphasis on actions. Example Rather than: “What are you doing?” He asked in a stern tone. I prefer: “What are you doing?” He inquired, demanding. Example 2 Rather than: She shifted in discomfort at his presence. I prefer: She shifted, discomfort clinging to her form at his close proximity. Engaging or not, it’s the style I chose. And like I’ve stated, I’m continuously refining it. (4/5) Update Stability: Infrequent schedule. The truth of the matter is that I only write when I’m excited or motivated. I also have to go through my written content multiple times, changing lines, adjusting the tone, editing the grammar, and all that stuff. One thing I can guarantee is that I will complete this story, like most of my stories. Of course that’s only possible if I don’t croak. Chapters are mostly updated weekly or semi-monthly. It takes me two months to prepare an arc. So, except the third arc late September. (3/5) Story Development: it’s going to be a huge story so the development will be massive and exciting. I will explore everything and then some. Might even branch the story in the future. (5/5) Character Design: I’m obviously trying to give depth and adequate development to all notable characters, that’s why I have multiple perspectives. Overlord has a lot of exciting characters who are grossly underused. Ninya. Zesshi. Arche. Lakyus. Renner. Brain. Ramposa. Marquis Raven. And more. Proper development will be given, not just touch and forget. Everyone will grow along with the story. (5/5) World Background/ Building: Perhaps the most important aspect of this story. Y’all just hold on tight, it’s gonna be a wild one. (5/5) Overall Rating: 4.4/5

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5paghetti_5auce

I'm really glad you posted your story here because it's been an awesome read so far! I particularly liked how similar this feels from the original, while also adding to the world building and cast. I have only one concern for this story: with Ainz being different from the series the story has lost the motive of him struggling to keep up with those around him and now that he is even more powerful I fear there would be no struggle moving forward and that would be unexciting. Still; thanks again for sharing your story. I'm eager for more