Overlord of Naruto World

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ben10rocks

Hello Author here! My story is about a protagonist who was given a chance to change his fate. He would be given two gifts and later used them gain strength for himself and his friends while exploring the vastness of space. I have chosen Naruto universe coz I like it. But I don't like the way Boruto manga is going on. So I am writing my own version. Their will be many overpowered characters and I am increasing the strength of all Otsutsuki clan members. They are a clan which conquers planet after planet. How can they be so easily defeated by kids like Boruto. In my fanfic, villain will have a brain and get power ups like the protagonist. They will be defeated but not for their own stupidity.

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Kaiser_D_Drache

well, as the main character he doesn't seem to have anything extraordinary defining him now, He is just a somewhat strong side character before Tsunade and the other girls now, Tsunade more powerful(physically) than him with even better bloodline release(wood) Mikoto and kano even kushima seem to have better eye powers And, they have even more powerful bloodline releases than him(wood, ice, earth) individually at this point, [ch, 18]he is rather than being like a protagonist(mc) he's like a sub stepping stone for the girls

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GODDRACKLIGHT

I think that's pretty good.faster updates.............................................................................................................................

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DaoistDrunkenSword

Overall I really enjoy it! It isn't too cliché with the story development and powers. The Author also develops the powers of the MC's and those that he interacts with really well. I personally like the way that the bloodlines and unique powers are developed or obtained. The author does a good job when explaining things in detail and showcasing how things work in a logical, methodical way. If there's one thing I could recommend the Author ben10rocks to change to perhaps make it easier to enjoy the story even more, I'd recommend reducing the amount info that he dumps in a singular chapter and integrating more character interactions into the story. The effort would honestly make this a perfect 5/5 for me.

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ZAHID_HASAN

update more chapter I like it very much don't stop keep going it's very satisfying to read it thanks for your hard work author san update more please [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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dronacharya1995

Good fanfic !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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WeepingCarp

Is it me or Does this guy just give up on good fanfics

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onlyashu008

it's sometimes I feel that 5 star are not enough. ........................................................................................................ this is one of those fics....sadly it been some time since update

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ThouShaltNotDie

good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

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ZAHID_HASAN

this is really great I like it don't stop keep going update more chapter thanks for the chapter and your hard work author san but don't drop it please [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Rizal_Assegaf

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DragonicOverlord13

Good Fanfic Keep up the good work !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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nicehat

good job ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------