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2 Siblings...... Leyla and Leon, As they went a road trip with their private plane..... on the road of return never would they have imagine themselfs in a new adventure......
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This novel is so cringy. Twin brother and sister are arrives in one piece world. The male wants all the girl as harem and the girl wants all the guy as harem. It wouldn't be so cringy if there was only harem for the male. Both of them are connected by a twin fruit even at spiritual level. It's cringy to think both will get excited when one of the twin is having sex. So, rather than enforcing your non-existent morals, better write incest or just kill the female lead. I'll rather read incest rather than this messed up ****.
Still waiting for INCEST Still waiting for INCEST Still waiting for INCEST Still waiting for INCEST Still waiting for INCEST Still waiting for INCEST Still waiting for INCEST
2 people with shared system? Sister is smarter and brother is stronger? I love this already!! Also please give them level system and world power ranks? For example: Level 1-9: Grown men with basic combat Level 10-19: Kid Luffy, Sabo and Ace level? Level 20-29: Luffy as he starts his journey? Level 30-39: Luffy Gear 2? Level 40-49: Weaker Captain level? Level 50-59: Stronger Captain level? Level 60-69: Weaker Vice-Admiral level? Timeskip Smoker? Level 70-79: Stronger Vice-Admiral level? Momonga, etc? Level 80-89: Luffy Gear 4th? Yonko executives? Level 90-99: Admiral level? Level 100-109: Weaker Yonko (Big Mom?) Level 110-119: Stronger Yonko (Shanks, Kaidou and Whitebeard?) Level 120-129: Roger level? Dimensional level, so they can go to another anime?
wtf. **** this novel. Male lead and Female lead are twins but both want a harem. wtf. just make it an insect. you want all guys to gangbang the male lead sister wtf is this ****. this is so ****ed up.
Idek but everyone in this review section has me wanting to mcShootmyselfinthe head 😐 y’all fucked up bastards. 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
Messed up author wants his female lead to get ****ed by all male characters😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
As is typical of this Author the work is pretty shallow but the update rate is high. If you want an actually good One Piece Fan Fiction read 'Lia and Lara will seek the One Piece' on RoyalRoadl. THAT work is very well done and has amazing writing quality.
Cant stand it anymore. It had a decent start and was enjoyable to read, but sadly the author wanted to spice it up with a plot twist and failed miserably. Dont waste your time on this one.
Ratings soooooooooooo bostedddddd , -∧,,∧-- 、 / (-ω-｀ ) / r-くっ⌒cソ、 / ノ '、 , 、 _, ' / / .（_,. ././ ,(.,_ ｀'ー-、_,,..ノ/ ~`''ー--‐' ∩∩ （´･ω･） ＿| ⊃／(＿＿_ ／ └-(＿＿＿_／ ￣￣￣￣￣￣￣
Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest Incest
Incest or harem or kill female mc or sabotage no reverse HAREM no female mc with other guy if u do it sabotage!!!!!!MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA
Hello, spoil me please: What will happen to his sister? would the siblings have incest? would little sister become a slut(reverse harem)? PLEASE ANSWER ME, SO I CAN DROP THIS EARLY
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INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! INCEST!
Yooo, i'm ****** and just fan of SEION. and its enough for 5* hahahahahahaha argggghhhhh for Hancock sake 140chapters argggghhhhh for Nami sake 140chapters argggghhhhh for Robin sake 140chapters
Love it keep the good work ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________-
Im your one of the newest fan seion, for those who new to seion pls, pls, pls read what he wrote and i gurantee that you will not disappointed
The sister is having a harme and the brother is getting NTR so sweet,however the brother gets a bit of his own harme but not so sure what his girl are doing behind his back if you know what I mean😂
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Love the fruit idea you did, but the MCs are too OP already basically, plus everything seems too forced. The system also totally disapeared once they trained for all those years, plus reactions were bit 2D. My biggest problem though are that almost 90% of what I read has ... after every sentence, and when it finally stopped, it picked up again! Still one of the better Fan Fics out there
FIVE STARS IF INCEST WITH SISTER AND HAREM!!! FIVE STARS IF INCEST WITH SISTER AND HAREM!!! FIVE STARS IF INCEST WITH SISTER AND HAREM!!! FIVE STARS IF INCEST WITH SISTER AND HAREM!!! FIVE STARS IF INCEST WITH SISTER AND HAREM!!!