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Ethan is pleased.
It's the year 1519, which means he's finally going out to sea.
After transmigrating to the one-piece world, he obtained the paramecia devil's fruit of repulsion.
This devil fruit, which was considered a Trash fruit, was brought to its maximum potential by Ethan, thus developing various abilities:
Shinra Tensei, Repel Damage, Repel Space,
Repel tiredness, etc...
He is destined to become the strongest in this world!
No one can stop it.
His story begins here...
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Horrible grammar. The plot is okay-ish but grammar needs to be corrected.
Another pick and go garbage. Author picks characters he wants in the mc's crew, and doesn't even bother to justify why they would want to join. >Mc comes >"Want to join me" >Character joinsNo thought put into this whatsover. I sugges having this retard's hands chopped off so he could never pollute the world with such garbage again.
This is an mtl translation rewrite. The author does not mention this, which is suspicious. Anyways, the mc is the same as cn version. Only practicing and female crewmates come to admire him. No changes but better grammar.
I may be wrong but it's an LTM, the story as far as I read is nice and the plot is constantly advancing which is satisfying, it looks like the MC was able to destroy an island so I assume it will be strong
The story is average at best. The plot is nothing new but has a lot of holes and grammar really needs to be fix. The main problem comes from the MC himself. He sprouts all kinds of nonsense in order to justify his actions and somehow other character believe it despite how ridiculous he sounds. Things just happen because it does and the mc really tries to justify it. From the formation of the crew, it turned into nothing more but just a harem. Their is no depth in the character, just power and women.Overall nothing but the usual self insert oc character who is strong for the sake of being steong and having many women join him without any good or believable reasons.
Plot wise it seems fine but more depth would be nice you could go into the thoughts of the people he recruits as well so the readers can better understand why they made their choices. The writing format needs fixing, the grammar needs work, and you could do better on word choice as well as using the correct gender pronouns.Character design is lacking for the main character because his thoughts and reasons for doing what he does aren't really explained nor his exact his strength and ability development level.Update stability remains to be seen ( I won't actually judge it before 100 chapters so I'll give an average score) World background is one piece since it's a fanfic and all so average score here as well
I really try because it looks interesting, but most of the time all I do is try to understand what I just read
Être dans one piec et ne pas rejoindre les mugiwaras quel preuve d'infériorité Minable [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I was thinking and I want your opinion that they think about uploading chapters on Sundays on my part I can, no problem on my part so leave me your opinion here.
The story is good but his spacing suck, if your listening to this Mr. writer please move the sentences closer together It really hard to read it like this.
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Your grammar could use a lot of work. It’s a great story on how strong guy progress to become more stronger. It’s enjoyable to read a little as the main protagonist goes on adventures to fulfill his goals and gather like minded people to help fulfill their own goals as well.
The story is good, there are problems with the writing in the first chapters, but it seems that the author realized this and later on he solved it, the plot is easy to understand and there are few characters that can present a danger to the MC so he concentrates on creating a strong crew.
best one piece fan fic for me with all the wishes that a person wants in it