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On a hospital bed, a boy takes his last breath. For him who stayed in this place for decades, this death became his freedom. Though he had a wish that was to be reincarnated in an anime world and do all the cool stuff that the main characters do alas this will only remain a wish.
Or will it?
When he opened his eyes he found that he had been reincarnated into the body of Kasugano Ryuu. That's not all he even got Psychic powers, Cool right? Though he was the only person to have power in this world. He thought his life was going to be boring but what do you know he got a panel which allows him to travel through the omniverse.
Watch as he makes waves in this new world. Doing what every isekaied person does best.
I don't own any of the series or the cover. This is a fanfic so there's that
This is not a single world and other worlds are also mixed together.
The worlds being
1) Yosuga no sora
2) Kaguya sama love is war
3) Oregairu
and maybe others.
The world he will be traveling are
1st: That time I got reincarnated as a slime
2nd: One piece
3rd:?????
Note: Some of the worlds may be AU.
(A/N: Here romance will be slow-paced and the harem also will not be that big. The main character at the start will be strong but not that op)
I hope you enjoy this.
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Well, this is for if you want extra chapter's.
500 power stone- 1
1000 power stone- 2
2000 power stone- 3
As for why so many power stones, well I don't want to work like a slave. And if I make it too low, I will have to do that.
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I enjoy plot so far (beside the fight with Vega) but it's already more than 80+ chapter and he (MC) doesn't even enter 1 relationship yet, and the author want this story become a harem ? are we need to wait 200+ chapter before he enter relationship with multiple partner ? I know the author doesn't want this to be pokemon harem but the progress is too slow, not just the romance but the plot too. I think it's better to make it little bit fast-paced, after all in this fanfic, it's not just one world that need to be explore. If this fanfic doesn't include World hopping then you can make it slow pace.
Tiết lộ Spoiler
So, the beginning chapters were quite rough grammar-wise. But don't worry I have improved it. (I think I did I can't be sure as I am not a Reader) Still, I hope you enjoy my work and don't forget to drop a review on what you think. Bye for now.
The story is good, but the grammar and spelling are bad. You need to fix that. Maybe use ChatGPT if English is not your strong suit. The main character seems to be dull and boring; you don't tell us anything about him or how he looks. The powers seem cool. I hope you keep up the good work.
Too many grammatical errors, stupid and hypocritical main character, stretching things out dozens of times when it could have been done in one or two chapters, forced plot
I guess I'll put five star review first and think about it in the future if i change it so keep up with the good work author-san
Sinceramente no me gusto, el hecho que mágicamente en menos de 8 horas tiene la capacidad de hacker todo los gobiernos del mundo y sin ningún explicación de cómo mierd pasa de un 0 conocimiento a nivel súper dios ssj fase 4 realmente me saco toda ganas de leer este fanfic
Dear author, could you tell me at what point in your novel, does Mc fix himself and stop being a coward and tell the truth to Sora, Yukino and his friends?
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Muito bom mesmo 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😃😊😊dhu3628whwygdysbhedudhsjdudhdhdhdhdhdhdbussnusdjdudjdhrdkzosmxuneoxndyqnKj;38*;$-$-*8$;$7$;$7
Great story development by the author, though the update isn’t frequent the story is Great hope the author does not drop this novel. For those whom read reviews about a novel before reading this is for the you the story would be the greatest novel to read. I will be waiting for you guys to leave your opinions of the fan fic in the comments
a pathetic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]main character
Nul trop long [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
It has a interesting plot but the author drags everything out making a something that would have taken at max 3 chapters into 12. The first 20 chapters are in need of editing cause the grammar can kill.
Muy buena. realmente me gustó la temática, espero con ansias que yukino sea la primera pareja" .......................................................
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Honestamente no se bien como calificar esta historia, por un lado me gustó el mundo crossover en el que reencarnó y como se fue al mundo de Tensura, pero el desarrollo de los personajes es muy malo desde mi punto de vista. Las chicas se enamoran fácilmente del protagonista, muestra que sabe lo que sienten por él pero actúa como el típico estúpido y denso protagonista. No muestra el trasfondo de ninguna de las chicas excepto Shizu(y Sora puede ser) y vas agregando chicas al harem de la nada según el momento como fue con Utaha y Kaguya sin explicar nada, al principio era entendible que las rechazara por su falta de emociones para no lastimarlas, pero después de que volvió a su mundo siguió haciéndose el estúpido y evitando el tema como si fuera denso. Otra critica que tengo es que la mayoría de los capítulos son demasiado cortos, por ejemplo en la explicación del pasado de Shizu, lo podrías haber explicado todo en un solo capitulo pero lo separaste en muchos capítulos cortos que tenían poco o ningún contenido importante. También hay nombres de personajes mal escritos. Te recomiendo también hacer un capitulo especial mostrando las habilidades y la imagen del protagonista. El transcurso de la historia en el mundo de Tensura estuvo muy bueno y bien hecho. El desarrollo del protagonista iba bien hasta que terminó su primer viaje en el mundo de Tensura, pero cuando volvió a su mundo y mostró que tenía emociones parece que se le apagaron las neuronas y entró en piloto automático, tampoco ayudó que tuviera a su otro yo gritándole en el oído por cada estupidez.
Tiết lộ Spoiler
Aurthor here as this is my first story there may be some mistakes, so all the criticism as requested. I hope you enjoy this story and the upload schedule will depend on the time.