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Of Mechs and Magic
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Roger was a prisoner at the young age of 15, serving a sentence of hard labor in his parent's stead. His life consisted of moving metal, hiding his emotions, and avoiding the attention of everyone else.
That all changes when he is summoned to the mirror world, Avar, where magic can be harnessed and claimed.
The government, however, is not so keen on letting their property escape, and Roger must learn to master his powerful magic of copying other abilities.
From the rank of Alpha to Omega, he will prove he is worthy of an Archonic Legacy, a gift from the old rulers of Avar, or become nothing more than a prisoner again.
The magic of Avar must face against the mechs of Earth, as the politics of two worlds collide in a battle that will shake the stars.
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This is a great story. I can't stop my self giving it a five star review Quite remarkable as the story telling and the back ground is well designed....
Alls good, overall its taking a bit to cook but its nice since its good for immersion. The first three chapters had lots of words I'd felt like it was half of it. Good
Your writing felt so magical from the beginning. I got hooked from the first chapter itself. I read as if the scenes played before my eyes. Keep updating!
I appreciate the clearness of the writing and find the dichotomy between an industrialized Earth and the high fantasy planet Avar. The mc is cool, and the power system is thought out. There are even clever nods to a corrupt government, such as a child being given the sentence for his parents crime after they die. All in all, a strong start.
What an interesting premise. The book is really interesting and great. I like how his ability gives him the agency to be thoughtful and strategic while being powerful but not too OP. I really like how's its grounded that way. And the tiny references to his prison life are a great way to show his previous life and struggles. Definitely very well written. Keep u the good work author