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Haaa…I am happy for Miles but I just couldn’t take my mind off the worry, what if?, I smiled at Miles and hugged him.
I know that look Ericka, if you are worried about me, don’t be, I can take care of myself now. You’ll see. We are not children anymore and I will prove to you that I am more capable of handling myself and those filthy monsters, so rest assured that I will come back home for you and Sarah!, Miles said and I hugged him again but now tighter. I don’t think that he will make it unless I am there with him to protect him. I love my friends and though I am a good Barista, I love war games and killing monsters is my specialty. But I don’t really know if my special ability could help the aviators but

I want to try and put it to good use which way possible, I thought and decided to check on DOGS Academy the next day and tried to sign up for the course. I got accepted right away and when I checked on the systems they use it’s almost the same as the simulators I usually play with and this is making life more interesting and exciting for me. Miles didn’t know I will be joining him for the eight months training. And this is going to be a hell of a game in real life, fighting, killing monsters, here we go!

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LindaLight

Your synopsis wasn't so catchy. Your first chapter discouraged me. your paragraphs are too long and your writing quality needs improvement . but i feel an amazing plotline can come out of it anyway

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K_8422

Hey! K this side. The storyline, inculcation of various aspects from digi to green cities (added environmental pov), the chakra and aura( spiritual aspect), the depiction of obsession via characters ( triggered human psychology ) .... read the initials, it was awesome. Soon give it an entire read and comeback for the new comments or i would say compliment :) . Thank you .

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