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No One Will Be God.
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Humanity is on the verge of its collapse. Seeing this, the Gods decide that the best solution is the extermination of the human race.
They send out giant monsters that raze half the land, thus forcing humans to hide...
Seeing such brutality one of the Gods decides to rebel and help humanity. He gifts the most capable humans with extraordinary powers.
Now it's time for humanity to turn against its creator!
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good story and I can see this improving but My only issue is the tense being used and some random info inserted in a bracket. tho it can be improved with time but a strong grammatical background is important for the story development. but anyways all the best author!! you have my support.
Readinf this somehow fees nostalgic for me! The story flow is good and intriguing! My only issue is the tense being used and some random infos inserted in a bracket, it feels like there is a barrier between me and the story and I somtimes find it hard to get connected. But other than that it’s good!
The story plot and the world background is interesting! There are grammar issues but a bit of editing will solve that. My major issue is used of --- instead of "" for speaking. I know you put a description in an earlier chapter but the dash lines dont really read well, especially when there are two characters speaking in my opinion. This is more personal preference since I'm used to see " used for character dialogue as well. Other people might be fine with it so choose whichever works best for you. Beyond that the story is growing and has good potential! Keep up the great work!
So I only read the first chapter but the world building is amazing. The prologue/ auxiliary chapters are actuall useful. The writing is good and the way things are described is amazing
I come here in this comment to let you know that I will take a break and be back in 2-3 weeks. I've been having problems with creativity and also laziness, I'm going to use this time to write and idealize the next arcs. I hope you understand.
Looking good! Keep up the good work! ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The story and world creation is quite interesting, it has huge potential to be an amazing story! Please stay strong and strong! (the characters are pretty cool too)