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Naruto has always had video games to fall back on growing up while the rest of the village pretty much treated him like garbage. What happens when Naruto wakes up to find his life has become one of the video games he loves so much.
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Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto. Any similarities between real people, living or dead, or places, standing or demolished, in this story are just coincidences.

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HEMANG_SEN

A good read overall , a massive improvement to the original for sure , I hope the author doesnt turn Naruto into a chick magnet with kurenai and Anko in the group. Dry not to get reduced to degeneracy , dont have more than 2 or 3 girls with naruto. When the number of fanfics that have been destroyed because of this reason have exceeded the number of fingers you have , you know it has to be avoided at all costs. But , its your story really, you dont have to listen to me. Anyways, till this ff has been consistent. All cool

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1yr
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Golden_Dragoon

5 stars bcuz I like it.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

1yr
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SHCH7
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Good fic. Interesting to read. But, it seems to be similar to/inspired by another fic of the same name on ff by author 'MaxFic'..... Anyway, I'll continue to read with the hope that this fic will be better than that one.

1yr
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Davius_357602

Like it make more but make sure to take care of your health to so the story continues to be as good as it is now

1yr
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Daoist_Cheesecake

System revealed so dropped. Overall, this novel was good. Not amazing, since it’s a standard system fic but it’s well written with decent grammar and few typos. I won’t go into the many positives and negatives but I’ll say this, never reveal the system in a gamer fic. You will always lose a good percentage of the audience you built. The ones that wanted it revealed would have continued reading anyway, but the readers who do not want it will stop. The negatives always outweigh the positive, from hindering story progression/immersion, forcing character progression/interaction, I can go on and on. Awful decision.

7mth
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HEMANG_SEN

It has several problems if you consider carefully. Naruto telling about his gamer ability to other people is weird I guess. But I sincerely believe the problem is being blown out of proportion here. Narutoverse doesn't have games . They don't know the acceleration it provides to the user(which in case of Han-jee-Han system is too fast to stop). Not that it matters , by the time they would want him captured , he will be too strong to stop. P.S- He is already jonin level. And the chunin exams are still 3 months away. he is a monster already

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DaoistcBe0Xk

Will he take revenge on Konoha?..............................................................................................................................

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ShatteredMusic

I'm liking the story, the pacing is nice, well written and a lot of chapters, Author seems to be trying, shown when he looked up every single weapon ten ten used During the fight and commented their picture so that we could better imagine the fight

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1yr
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dragon_heart_3549

All stars keep up the goood work ——————-

1yr
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Mikey_3214

It’s amazing but the party system is one of the worst themes :( amazing fanfic tho good character development and wolrd development and relationship development 👌🏾

7mth
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MoiQ
LV 10 Badge

Vraiment bon😁 but WHERE IS MY 143 CHAPITER😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????????????????????????

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Psan
LV 5 Badge

Hey author... answer me this... Did you stole the 2014 fanfic from here fanfiction.net/s/10574684/1/Naruto-The-Gamer-Files ???? It was written by MaxFic. You just changed the words a little but the content its 100% the same. And did not bother to even change the title.

11mth
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MoiQ
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Très bon j’adore …………………….………………………………………….……………………..…………………….…………………….………………………………………….……………………..…………………….…………………….………………………………………….……………………..…………………….

1yr
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dao_of_memes

I really liked how you finished a dropped fic with your own ideas

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Dage335

Just started reading this I enjoyed it so far have finished chapter 59 wish the updates happen more but I understand that writing takes a lot out of people just don’t drop it’s so good so far

1yr
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one_punch_op

Now to be honest even with so many people opposing you're idea of sharing information about the game you still did and that was a good decision since this doesn't look like a spur-of-the-moment decision since it seems to be well thought out I mean these are question most would ask how would naruto buy clothing, food, house appliances and book and stuff even if he had a system without an old man at the age of 50 in his body and you are answering those questions so keep it up author your doing good job so far, I mean I am at chap 16 and this the conclusion I have reached. Thank you author for sharing your creativity with us.

1yr
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DaoOfCookies

5 stars for the quest in chapter 4, finally a system that doesn't punish you for trying

1yr
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cephas_chipangura

Great story love it. But if you find the time can you create a Shadow Slave fan fic ,l just love your writing style and l think it's perfect for a world like Shadow Slave.

2mth
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pEmKayS
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Really good fanfic. Good story. Nice world background. Well written characters. Good romance. What else do you need for a good read?)

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