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On the one month training period that leads up to the final round of the chunin exam. Naruto after constant failure at summoning a toad finally summoned an egg?
Naruto isn't mine, pokemon isn't mine the images on the book cover isn't mine. I might take inspiration from other works of anime or use other people's art and and so on credit goes to them I only take credit for my work and ideas.
I am new at writing fiction so you'll see improvements in my writing as I go. constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated.
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Viết đánh giáI liked the premise. a unique fanfic involving pokemon and naruto but thr author is obviously not invested. the spelling, spacing, and punctuation are horrendous. ZERO attempt at editing and reviewing. just seems lazy. and if the author doesn't care then the audience should be wary of investing in the story.
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I wouldn't be writing it if I thought it was trash