Naruto: Ninja for Hire

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finalgetsuga

this is legitemently trash the mc is just trying to suck up to the main cast is focused on trying to help everyone else but himself ,they tell yu nothing about the mcs age and the time frames are wrong the uchiha clan was destroyed when sasuke was 8-9 so why did it get massacred when he was 6 and we have no info on anything and the mc is dumb and makes stupid descisions please dont bother reading this

LV 11

Elder

First 6 chapters are ok. But in 7 and after it brain activity in author brain ceased. So you need to off you brain if you want to read. ~~~~~

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JustMessingAround

This book is a good way to pass time if you don’t have anything else to do, but there are better books to be read in this site. Writing: The grammar is actually good compared to many I have read. Update stability: Average, sometimes it goes on hiatus but generally it is updated at least once a week. Story development: The premise of the story is good but that is all there is to it. The way it actually developed was bad, almost to the point of being horrible. Many plot holes, many characters being unlike themselves, abilities being developed without making any sense. I suggest that the author either makes a general plotline before starting a book or get a beta reader or even a friend to flesh out the plot. Character design / development: The worst part of this book. The character is somehow dumb, naive, arrogant, without a pint of common sense and it does not get better as the chapters go on. Either watch anime or movies to get a feel of a character to implement or start the design before you start the story. World background: Standard Naruto world, nothing really bad about it. In general: not a good story, but it is a good start, just need more thoughtfulness and complexity.

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Victor_Gibelli

Interesting start so far and the spelling and grammar are actually readable so good job.

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Ezzaldien_s

(محاسبه) اصول= ممتلكات القرض /الدين= خصوم رأس المال= حقوق الملكية دفتر اليوميه= بنسجل في كل يوم التبويب (دفتر الاستاذ)= نفرز ونحط كل حاجه ف مكانها المبيعات= الايرادات المشتريات= المصروفات التلخيص (ميزان المراجعة)= المدين = الجانب الايمن الدائن= الجانب الايسر العرض= القوائم الماليه ربح إجمالي ربح صافي قائمه الدخل = بنحدد نتيجه المشروع من الربح او الخساره في نهايه السنه( بنعملها كل سنه) تحديد المركز المالي= اي الفلوس اللي ليا وال عليا الاصول = مدين / المصروفات الخصوم = دائن / ايرادات/حقوق الملكيه اصول متداوله=نقديه بالخزينه/ نقديه بالبنك/ بضاعه حقوق الملكيه= رأس المال/صافي الربح اصول ثابته=عقارات /آلات/اثاث الاصول= الخصوم +حقوق الملكية حقوق الملكيه=الاصول-الخصوم

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Gd_Sys

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Frog_God_Mentor

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

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Aanand_Paliwal

need more chapters." waiting is such a draag"🥱🥱🤨🤨🤨

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Mercury_Dragon

it's good hopefully it continues........ ...............................................................................................................................................................

LV 4

AngeleoTheDoubtful

It's pretty bad altho the writing is okay the plot,system and character as well as the interactions mc have is pretty bad the interactions are pretty weird first of all why he speaking as if he already strong it has a strong sense of awkwardness or forced the system is lame and not that creative not to mention how the author made everything unknown clearly author had a idea in mind but failed to express it and the characters is even weirder they speak very fake and awkward fails to deliver the sense of life and emotion so bad ratings

LV 11

ptbv

nothing interesting the mc is boring the system is heu, it s a system and it's rarely work to make a story better the other charachers are as boring as the mc

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Br4tsch

Really nice novel pls keep it up 100% recommended i just hope you wont drop this treasure

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Shiina_Ma4ro

an excellent story but when you will update the story it's killing to verify if there is a new chapter almost everyday

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Arina_Manasikana_7835

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G2l

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Medalha

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Medalha

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Noname126

good keep going ..............................................................................................................................

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AnotherAtlas

The main character acts quite predictably. I was disappointed that he's not a neutral mercenary, just a more free konoha shinobi. Overall, it's main character is a big disappointment. Kinda expected better.