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Naruto : I received a system shop!!
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First time author! Please excuse the bad grammar and give me advice if you wish!
This is my take on a Naruto fanfic! It may not be very well done so give me some slack!
I will mostly be using my original ideas/characters (if any) for the shop function of the system. Though it does not mean you can’t give me ideas for items or skills from other anime or pop culture shows!
It’s a harem and I plan to make it big but I can’t promise you will be happy about it if you wish to see every member of the harem frequently! Let me know what characters of Naruto you want in the harem! Dead or otherwise lol!
Maybe even from other anime or shows if you can convince me!
I want my character Zasu to be a Poison, seals/barrier, and summoning build so if you have ideas tell me! But if you think you can convince me of something other then that path tell me!
I do not own any characters beside my OC, if this photo is yours please contact me and I will happily take it down!
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Hello I’m here for a shameless review! Plus I wanted to inform those that review my fanfic about honesty. I don’t mind negative reviews As long as it’s truthful. With that being said if you have any negative views about the fanfic please give explanations on why you do. So that I can work on them and try to fix it going forward. I won’t delete any reviews unless they are verbally hurtful or someone obviously trolling! Please no bot reviews, positive or negative. It isn’t fair to authors who are genuinely trying to write a story! Thank you to everyone who reviews the fanfic! Positive or negative!
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Nice, more please the history is very good full,ando Legendary moment, the webnovel, bro You inspered a me ................................,............
Love the fanfic man keep it up ...............................................................................................
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It's a great Naruto fanfiction!!! I love how MC (Zasu) not afraid to change the plot.. I also don't mind the harem, but please let Hinata be with Naruto... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san 😁😁👍👍👍
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it's pretty cool so far a system shop seems well you all know lol but it hasn't gone off the deep end yet so give it a shot there's not a ton to be said since it's only at five chapters but I has promise
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POV: When you finally find a fanfic where the MC isn't afraid to change the plot, but it turns out the MC is disappointing ..............................................................................................