Naruto: Gojo Satoru Template, Taking Over The Seventh Squad

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EvilBlueCrystal

You'd expect a more logical setup, like being part of a clan or having some kind of background, but instead the protagonist was adopted by Tsundade, without showing any of his past. There's no explanation as to how poison can bypass the supposed invincible power of Infinity, the only abilities that should be able to do this are those like to Kamui. There's no interaction with the system or the protagonist training, Instead of exploring the potential of these interesting abilities, we're left with a bland protagonist who magically becomes overpowered simply because he has a system or something, but the system is never actually shown, So what's the point of having incredible abilities if they're never properly utilized or explored? The protagonist's personality is as flat as a pancake, He lacks any goals or beliefs of his own, conveniently transforming into the "protector of Tsunade" and mimicking Kakashi's character traits, but instead eats candy. Furthermore, the excessive use of swearing by every character, and not having any respect for even the Jonin of the village is not realistic at all and becomes annoying. The numerous grammar mistakes and missing words throughout the novel are, make this unreadable, and some parts of the plot that make no sense, while lacking crucial details. The ninja test in the story is boring, Rather than focusing on the protagonist and his journey, we're subjected to pointless and meandering dialogues that probably exactly the same in the original or some other fanfiction. Then the protagonist randomly blows up a forest, never trying to hide anything, instead he shows his power to everyone, even though he claims earlier that he wants a peaceful life, which is something that was never interesting or believable in the first place.

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MayCarvallho

(Till 10th chapter) Well for starters it was a nice change of pace and writing quality is also good Mc is op like gojo have a carefree attitude almost all the time I just want to say to the author that gojo keeps his carefree attitude almost all the time with his students and gets serious only when with the higher ups and less with his students so make sure to keep that in mind

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Capivara_Brasil

bear=chest

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Zenos_Maxima2611

to be honest, even though Yogyo Satouru has rikugan and gojo templates. this makes me cringe. He's op, but super annoying as a gojo. and he is worse than Kakashi for teaching, neglecting teaching.

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Carlos_Henrique_4295

So far I'm enjoying the fanfic, I'd just like to ask you (author) to make the MC's romantic life progress, not make it a comedy..............

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hero4hire

Amazing story, the TL is somewhat weak but understandable but the story itself is SSS+ tier. MC personality is super funny and his powers are godly. One of the best fic i've read in a while!

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_Na_Na_

Quite nice, though I don't find the puns and jokes used funny, it feels like a dad joke to me, idk i just don't like it but over all I'll gave this 7/10.

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Daoist417027

Really good so far, love the mc he does seem like gojo.

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DaoistnTt0rv

Thanks for translating and Cant wait for more chapters!

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Lord_Azathoth

Will there going to be romance in this story?I don't know why the author did not mention this in the summary.I don't like to read fanfic that doesn't have any romantic components!!! »Comment«

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Ely_Konsoss

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James_Carlson_5574

La historia en mi opinión es buena y entretenida, no lo abandones, buen trabajo. --------------------------------------------------------------

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IFuckedJadeBeauty

My name is Yoshikage Kira. I'm 33 years old. My house is in the northeast section of Morioh, where all the villas are, and I am not married. I work as an employee for the Kame Yu department stores, and I get home every day by 8 PM at the latest. I don't smoke, but I occasionally drink. I'm in bed by 11 PM, and make sure I get eight hours of sleep, no matter what. After having a glass of warm milk and doing about twenty minutes of stretches before going to bed, I usually have no problems sleeping until morning. Just like a baby, I wake up without any fatigue or stress in the morning. I was told there were no issues at my last check-up. I'm trying to explain that I'm a person who wishes to live a very quiet life. I take care not to trouble myself with any enemies, like winning and losing, that would cause me to lose sleep at night. That is how I deal with society, and I know that is what brings me happiness. Although, if I were to fight I wouldn't lose to anyone.

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Azerath_Gamer

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